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Review of chapter "Explanations" from (Current Donor)IntoOblivion
Review:
Interesting. Seemed almost OOC for Dawn to give out so much information so easily, but then I think I remember the Council trying to recruit Lara in one of the later parts so I guess that's why. Plus by giving out what they did they probably prevented Lady Croft from immediately making an attempt to brake into one of the Council headquaters. Sorry... not really ooc at all just me being dense and not seeing reasons that aren't spelt out to me, ah well. I really enjoyed this characterisation of Faith, a nice description of her sexuality and moods with her sense of duty hiding behind them but shining through in her comitment to her tasks (flying frantically about to do everything).
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review :-). I'm really going to have to go back and re-read all of the stories in this series now :-) - I don't remember Dawn being that verbose.

As for her reason to say so much... I can see her thinking of Lara as a colleague even if they aren't in the exact same fields. And Dawn is still young - there might be a little bit of hero worship involved.
Review By [(Current Donor)IntoOblivion] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations" from (Recent Donor)JamieT
Review:
I'm just annoyed this story has so few reviews, when it deserves a lot more.

Very nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JamieT] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Explanations" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Very well written, intriuging beginning. Please continue!
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [27 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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