Review of chapter "Perdition" from Luna
GREAT STORY! Your writing style is great and I was cracking up the whole time. I especially liked all these lines:
Buffy sat up straighter, jutting her chin out defensively. “I don’t like your manners. Aren’t you people ‘spose to be polite?”
“A horrible lie that has somehow propagated itself.”---LOL!!!
“He got it from driving railroad spikes through his critics,” she informed him without a moment’s hesitation.
“Sounds like a charming fellow.”-----another LOL!
It was too bad the noticeable slur in her words ruined her attempt at intimidation.---You have amazingly funny lines :)
She did what anyone would do in such conditions. She moaned like a wounded beast.---hahahahhaha. Yeah. That’s sexy ;)
What To Do In A Strangers Motel Room The Morning After. Not After That. Innocent Afters. Written by Buffy Summers, Cause She’s Been There.--- Where on earth do you get this stuff? Cause there be some classic lines here!
Review By [Luna
] • Date [2 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perdition" from Krysstinia
I really like this. You did a great job. Comparing Lily and Spike at the end was a rarely used idea.
Review By [Krysstinia
] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perdition" from LaDySiN
I really dug that, usually my biggest beef with Buffy/Sev stories where they get along is someone is usually out of caharcter but you wrote them both beautifully.
Review By [LaDySiN
] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Perdition" from Javian
Wow. Excellent story.
Review By [Javian
] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Perdition" from firefly
I really like this a lot. I'll have to check out your other BS/SS!
Review By [firefly
] • Date [17 Apr 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perdition" from purrfus
Beautifully done. Loved the interaction between them; Buffy was so surprised at her attraction and you made that very clear.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [29 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perdition" from BlameyFomorrii
That was so sweet. I wouldn't mind reading a continuation of this. But it's just as good as a stand alone. I think I'm going to go read the Other Half now. Sounds cool.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii
] • Date [26 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perdition" from iceyflame
Hey. As always another fantastic story. Again I think Snape, and Buffy were written extreamly well. I have to say you are my favorite writer when it come's to Buffy crossovers. I absolutely adore The Other Half, and this was almost as good as The Other Half. I have yet to find a crossover to be atleast half as good. I recently developed a Remus/Buffy obsession, you should consider writing a crossover with them paired I'm sure it would be amazing. Thanks
Review By [iceyflame
] • Date [26 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perdition" from musicgirl
*awed silence* This was brilliant. Powerful. I do think you should continue this, because it seems to me that both Buffy and Snape would be curious about what eachother were. I would love to see more on this,but you were right, it could stand alone. you are to be highly commended. Go you!
Review By [musicgirl
] • Date [1 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Perdition" from MaggiesMom
fun. I enjoyed it.
Review By [MaggiesMom
] • Date [26 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Perdition" from Seak
That was a very thought provoking story and I would love it if you continued with this story. It has such potential, in fact this story was very good.
It had me tingling with wander, you have the angst, the mystery and the characterisation, even though this might be a one shot I would love it.
Do you know what makes a great story for a crossover? Its when the writer keeps the readers in suspence, it when the writer keeps the mystery between both characters, never having the other know completely about the other. It keeps the reader turning the page to the next chapter, having them read every little word just to make sure they're not missing anything. (Just my advice on a great story, like I said this was really, really very good)
Comments from author:
Thanks Seak :D
No sequel is planned- mostly because anything I'd write would fill 'inserted'. I never say never, but it's highly unlikely.
I agree on the mystery keeping it a page turner. :D Which is good, cause I hardly ever give everything away- especially to the characters. I like pulling the wool over their eyes, it's fun. Especially when I can confuse them and the reader. If you predict what's going to happen to the letter- I haven't done my duty as a writer. Though, I try to drop hints.
Thanks for reviewing ^.^
Review By [Seak
] • Date [3 Apr 04] • Not Rated