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Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from JinaSolo
Review:
So, how is there a story No. 2 in the series, if this story is not done?

More please!
Comments from author:
Not quite sure I understand the question. The series this is part of includes a number of stories with events running in parallel. It's not linear. If you're waiting for the first story to finish before starting the others, you'll have a very long wait.
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [14 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from Shadowman
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Interesting story, I hope you will continue it soon.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from (Current Donor)vladt
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this is actually a reread, but i was rude and did not comment on this fine tale. thank you for the excellent read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from sdavidm
Review:
Intriguing so far. I hope you continue!
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [6 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from scottm
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Great chapter. I am glad to see you are writing this again. Will you keep working on this series? Keep up the wonderful writing.
Comments from author:
Yes, I'm still working on this. Hopefully more this year than last. :-)

Thanks for the comments.
Review By [scottm] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from (Past Donor)IntoOblivion
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Yay, more! And finally Lara and Willow meet. God I really should have something more sensible to say about the chapter... but beyond the fact that it was (as can be expected from a writer of your caliber) well written with your usual knack of getting the characters spot on I'm pretty much stuck in a state of overwhelming glee that this series has been updated. I hope your inspiration to continue flourishes... as no doubt you've realised through my plethora of reviews over the years, the wonderfully complex nature of your story astounds me and I'm constantly anxious for more.
Review By [(Past Donor)IntoOblivion] • Date [21 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Nice to see another update from you and of a story that I'd almost forgotten even. I liked Willow's little briefing, and as usual I'm curious as to where you're going to take this next. Loved the Tolkien reference too.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from Wormbait
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Awesome, I'm so happy to see this one on the move again. You must be psychic, I was just thinking the other day that It's been a while since I read this series and was almost finished working my way though what there was and then all of a sudden there's more. :)

Nice to see Lara and Willow finally meet face to face, and Lara at last gets to learn a little of what's going on.

Well done on another excellent chapter of this entertaining and wide reaching series, I look forward to seeing more when the muse strikes you.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from SpacedCadet
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An Update!

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!

I was afraid you had abandoned this.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt IV)(Brush Knee)" from fanrei
Review:
glad to see you writing. thank you.
Review By [fanrei] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt III)(White Crane Spreads Its Wings)" from Traveler
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This is a wonderful series and I have enjoyed it greatly. Now for the BUT statement- I liked the way the first story was going and while I have followed the rest of the stories I still want to see the quest through till the end. Please after 4 years update and hopefully finish story number 1. Thanks for sharing with us.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt III)(White Crane Spreads Its Wings)" from QOShea
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Are you still working on this fic? It's very good :)
Review By [QOShea] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt III)(White Crane Spreads Its Wings)" from fanrei
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you're evil you know! leaving us hanging like that is bad.

willow is Lara wiccan . they have lot of sweet and stalkerly moments and then the seers say that no they haven't that kind of connection. you're doubly evil.
Review By [fanrei] • Date [3 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Part I) (Commencing)" from (Past Donor)IntoOblivion
Review:
Just wondering, but considering all the 'coincidental' meetings various members of this Trio have had with Lara Croft wouldn't one of them have noticed that she, as well as Kennedy resembles the girl in Buffys vision?

As far as I can tell so far the interractions between Willow, Buffy or Dawn and Lara have been:
- Buffy finds her 'following' Willow about at some point in S7
- Willow analyses the data Faith gained from Lara and (I assume) sees the photos Faith took, Dawn meets her on the plane with Faith and has a long chat (since this is not mentioned in Girl In A Bar, Buffy doesnt seem to have been told about this or realised its the same woman anyway)
- Buffy meets Lara at the reception in the museum
- Buffy interracts with Lara in China (I haven't got up to that story yet... so that I'm kinda guessing)
- Willow leaves on her pilgramage not knowing from where her prophecised help will come, due to Wiccan intervention Lara and she end up at the same shrine.

To be fair this is probably explained in a later part of the series (I'm still only half way through) and perhaps the connection isn't made because only Giles knows all the seperate pieces. But with Buffy having her curiosity about the woman raised by her coincidentally having met a person on Giles' list it might, perhaps have come up... I dunno. I guess as its only really Buffy that knows about all/most of the meetings, its probably just that she hasn't made the connection between a random mysterious woman who seems unconnected to the evil underworld and a prophecy about the end of the world. She is, after all, action girl... not the one who puts all the puzzle pieces together.
Comments from author:
Why didn't Buffy connect Lara to the woman in her slayer dreams?

Hmm... none of them have really had enough contact with Lara at "this" point in the series to make the connection. It'll happen eventually. :-).
Review By [(Past Donor)IntoOblivion] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pilgrimage (Pt III)(White Crane Spreads Its Wings)" from Dragonelf
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I hope you get inspired to continue this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::

This story was just as good as the last time I read it.

::Starts reading the next story in the series::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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