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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
Awesome story! I love the 11 year old versions of the Scoobies and Fang Gang (plus Jonathon, Lindsey and Lilah). I really hope you continue adding to this story, I can't wait to see what happens next! Plus I'm really curious about the Chrestomanci thing. Anyway, Please, please, please, PLEASE update soon!!!!

Thanx,

DemonChilde
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [15 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Keshkreature
Review:
Wow, this is a really cool story. I'm having a little trouble keeping who's who strait in my head, but I think I'm coming around. Can't wait to read more.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [20 Apr 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from littleoldme
Review:
A nice end to the chapter. I'm surprised that you've introduced the spell so early. You probably could have played it out for at least another chapter, but I'm still enjoying it, greatly. Lindsey's characterization is very off for me, but other than that, most of the characters resemble their show characters, though Dawn isn't quite awkward or whiny enough to be an eleven year old Dawn. You're best at Tara and Spike, I think, and I love the relationship between the two.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [12 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
I think this is a pretty great start to a fic, and I'm glad my challenge inspired it. You write the characters well, though there are so many of them that it's a bit hard to keep track of who's who. Willow's a Weasley cousin, Tara's Hermione's little sister, Jonathon's Snape's son... after that, I more or less lose track. Oh, and Dawn and Wes as Luna's siblings? It's a nice touch. I'm a little surprised that Dru isn't related to Luna (I can so see that one), but I look forward to seeing what you do with these as well. Oh, and Buffy's characterization made me smile, as did Spike's.
Comments from author:
I probably shouldn't have gone for the easy 'Willow's a Weasley' thing, but I did. Tara being Hermione's sister was inspired by JKR saying that Hermione was supposed to have a younger sister. As for Jonathan... I like Jonathan. I was thinking of Drusilla as a Lovegood, and then I realized that I can't write Drusilla (I can't particularly write Dawn either, but better than Dru). Actually, in the original version, Harmony was Wes' twin. I'm very glad I changed my mind, although now the fight scenes with Cordy don't make as much sense... I wouldn't have put so many in, but the spell idea took ahold of me, and then my brain began to think (always a bad thing).
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [12 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Kinda weird, kinda interesting. Drama kinda good. Humor not sure if it is twisted or just situational so far.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I'm not sure at this point either. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Apr 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Really kinda interesting. Not sure where you had Willow sorted by the language.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Willow was sorted into Gryffindor, sorry if that was confusing. I was alluding to the fact that Weasleys are always sorted into Gryffindor. Or, at least, I think that's what I meant :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Apr 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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