Review of chapter "Working title" from JarodsSlayer
I love it. when can you update?
Review By [JarodsSlayer
] • Date [13 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Working title" from glitzydancingshoes
Nice start; can't wait for you to update/continue. Only comment I have is that you could flesh out most of the paragraphs by detailing what Faith's thinking; after all, this has to be something of a headrush! But, other than that, I'd say this is looking nifty. I'm eagerly waiting on the next installment.
Review By [glitzydancingshoes
] • Date [17 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]