One little typo ('drying' in the first paragraph, when you meant to say 'driving'), but I'm glad you got back to this story. Hopefully, with Connor growing up with a brother and a mother-figure, maybe he wasn't so badly warped this time around.
And I ALMOST felt sorry for Tess in season 3, when she came back to Roswell because baby Zan was entirely human and was rejected by her people and then died in order to protect Zan (whom Max then gave up for adoption, also supposedly for his protection). Much better possibilities this time around, I hope.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 May 10] • Not Rated
update please? I know I have been bugging you about your old unfinished stories, but they are pretty good and deserve to be finished.
Comments from author:
It's not bugging, I'm actually happy someone enjoys the old stuff. It's just that a lot got lost with the computer crash, so I'm trying to get back on task with some of them. I've been scouring my drives to see if I have anything saved on this one, but even if I don't, I remember how this one was supposed to go.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I think you've got quite an interesting story idea going here, but you're rushing it just a bit too fast. Care to slow down and flesh it out a teensy bit more? *hopeful look*
Review By [Duchess] • Date [8 Sep 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Very interesting beginning. Maybe a bit too convenient that Zan (at least i guess the baby is Zan) happens to appear at Angel's, but that can be overlooked in favor of the whole plot idea - but I must admit I had a short visual flash that it might have been fun if Zan had appeared in the Summers home...
For now I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes on with Xander and Tess (and if the Roswell crew will do anything).
Keep it up and thanks for sharing.
Review By [malaskor] • Date [10 Dec 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
