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Review of chapter "Heroes" from Cordyfan
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Great story - just found it again today. Hopefully you'll return to it at some point in the future.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ascended" from DominoEffect
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Eek, so um, I know it's been awhile, a long while, since you've last updated, but I feel like I should bug you too. Cuz, I really enjoy your fics, and would like to know what happens next. :)
Review By [DominoEffect] • Date [14 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heroes" from RevDorothyL
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I'm really enjoying these glimpses behind the scenes, and especially the thought of Cordelia being there to usher Janet Fraiser into her next stage of existence. Thanks for updating this.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Full Circle" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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Very nicely done. I am a little lost but I am sure that is because of episodes I haven't seen yet. Of course, now I am dying to know where Daniel ended up but I get the impression that this fic fits nicely into SG-1 canon. Here's to me catching up! :D ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Abyss" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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Sorry that last one posted twice. Wouldn't go at all and then *poof*, doubles.

Anyway - OMG I have been spending too much time with the roomie. Jack and Sam? Cordy - you just said Daniel watches Jack in the shower. Jack/Daniel shippers are wetting themselves with glee. Are you subtext blind? Also, if you were joking about that bit - *cries* Not funny!!

My issues aside - LOVE this. Cordy is just perfect and I can so easily see she and Jack having this chat. :D ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ascended" from (Past Donor)Vesica
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Oh neat! I like the Ascended hanging out together. It always seemed to be like being a higher power would be boring. Makes me think of that line from "Heathers" - "God, the afterlife is SO boring. If I have to sing Kumbaya one more time..."

Anyway, love your Cordy voice and I never say no to imaginary Daniel running about in my head. Excited to see where this one goes! ~Ves
Review By [(Past Donor)Vesica] • Date [4 Aug 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Full Circle" from tals
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Lovely story. Poor Daniel and poor Cordelia, left behind... Ascended politics/rules sucks.

Great great story.

Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [3 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Full Circle" from (Moderator)Teri
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Daniel won't remember Cordelia. That is sad. I hope you find a way for them to continue their friendship. Nice work.
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Full Circle" from Darklight
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Nice touch of including the Atlantis SG, thos badies they ran into are straight out of horror, they remove the ghouls they get even worse baddies after them. Get more Cordy out like her being still around.

If there are good ascended are there also bad ascended, like being a balance, Like the powers and their opposite. If one side oversteps their hand it gives the other side one free move.

Keep the chapters coming, get Faith to be become also an ascended and Cordy runs into her, he he he, that would be fun.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Abyss" from VegaKatt
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Loved your story! Can't wait for more! I think the characters personas were dead on.
Review By [VegaKatt] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Abyss" from (Site Founder)Jinni
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Incredibly interesting take on the Cordelia being ascended theme. I am really looking forward to more of this.
Review By [(Site Founder)Jinni] • Date [26 May 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ascended" from Immortal
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This was so cute it almost made me cry. I'll look forward to more!
Review By [Immortal] • Date [10 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Ascended" from tals
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loved it! cordelia and daniel are very much in character and i like your use of the senses. for instance the smell of metal from buffy's sword, and the hum of the overhead lights in the sgc. you have good descriptions of your settings, and your characters are believable and introspective.

looking forward to your next chapter. wonder what would happen if they stepped through the gate??? think i might have an idea. well, we'll see if i'm right. or maybe we won't, it's your story, so whether or not you use it, is really your call.

you've done great so far, i'm sure i'll enjoy your next chapter. have fun writing.

tals
Review By [tals] • Date [7 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Ascended" from VillageOrchid
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Thoughtful. Interesting. Will either of them get the chance to interact or make a difference (or an AU)?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Apr 04] • Not Rated
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