I like your image of Dylan, reminds me of Riker on Star Trek: Next Gen.
And Will the ship putting the moves on Andromeda the ship while at the same time Willow puts the moves on Romi is cool. Willow and Trance should get on too, their both quiet and shy until you get them going, and they both have the hidden power thing going for them.
Hope you come back and continue it someday soon.
Chris
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Pretty good. For a while there I thought this was abandoned. Good to know it isn't.
Like another reviewer, I don't what Willow to give up her independence but, she goes tagging along. I can see her now with her resolve face and all having her way over Dylan.
I also like that reviewer's idea of uprading Willow's ship and imbuing it with magic.
Here is an idea of my own, Willow somehow gets up to date in all her geekiness (learns everything about Glorious Heritage warships).
Interesing, Virtual Willow/Andromeda and Willow/Ronnie here I sense.
Review By [Elizabeth] • Date [1 Dec 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Oooooo! This is one slick story. I like your characters, although I don't think Herc... I mean Dylan is quite the stick you make him out to be. And you are doing an excellent job with the science fictional elements too. I like your speculation about what an AI ship really is. I always thought the star ship Andromeda was the most interesting character on the show, and it isn't just because Ronnie is hot. But that might have helped. Lol! I hope you write more as I find your story... fascinating, to coin a phrase.
You know I think the Neitzien would be the last race in the universe that would turn gay. It wouldn't be in their genetic makeup.
Comments from author:
The driving force of the masculine identity is the propagation of the species. Each generation's purpose is to pass on their genetic material so the next generation can be born and evolution can be furthered. Since Tyr as a Nietzchien doesn't want to sully the gene pool by introducing substandard human DNA, he's gotta get his action somewhere else... and I don't think even genetic manipulation could completely remove all desire for sex or give even Tyr the control necessary to deny his body's needs for years at a time. And since I highly doubt that Harper could get pregnant... free fun for Tyr :)
Maybe Harper might not have wanted to sleep with Tyr because of his innate hatred for Nietzchiens, but during the Tyr years on Andromeda they were getting pretty buddy-buddy before the lameness of Tyr's demise. Maybe they could never really love each other, but they could probably solve their desires for physical gratification in each other. Besides, Harper's cute, and Tyr's big and buff, which makes a very appealing image when you put them together.
Thanks, 'Gan
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [8 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Interesting concept-not sure if I would pair Harper and Tyr considering Harper's history with the big N's and all the tribes therein. Dylan fawning over Willow is definetly in character-as well as amusing as anything. Can't wait for Harper's reaction to Andromeda/Will. Where are Rev and the purple princess? Or is it post Rev w/the Golden Goddess?