This story was going GREAT!! Two Xanders- both supportive and good guys, but one much more capable and the other a bit mediocre. We have a Willow that's about to go nuclear. We have a potential relationship (Xan and Daniel) that's about to die before it ever got a chance to build. And, there's a monster running around creating mayhem. Not to mention, one-eyed Xander and Willow in peril of losing their lives due to Buffy-driving. This story has a few places it can go: destroying the monster, reuniting capable Xan with his Willow before she self destructs, figuring out how to allow Xan and Daniel to be together, maybe capable Xan can help one-eyed Xan and his Scoobies to get back on track. Any chance of it being finished? It's a good story.
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Ths was chapter was awesome!! I cant wait for the next part to come out!! I really hope that the other scooby gang of the main xander finds him fast before willow gets worse. Keep 'em coming! ^_^
Review By [Faeri] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
The different incarnations of Xander...COOL! I liked the pairing of strong- Xander and Daniel, but it looks like that is not going to work out since he can't stay on Daniel's Earth. Good story!
Review By [kayron] • Date [6 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Interesting to say the least Wonder how they'll kill the beast Your worlds are done so neatly Fit together oh so sweetly Hard to convey my thoughts in rhyme I'll try and review again at a later time
Review By [jadedhavok] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Not Rated
So far, I'm in love with this story. I find it especially intriguing how you brought Xander into the SG-1 universe not only once, but twice. It was a unique way to go about things and I love your powerful Xander and how you have worked that out. You made him powerful but put a balance in place so that he isn't a god-like character. A lot of authors don't do that, they simply fall back on the person having morals instead of doing whatever they please. It's much better when you have a proper balance and makes it more realistic.
I'm looking forward to future updates of this story, Kynn.
Review By [Kynnetic] • Date [20 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]