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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven: Deadly Dating" from banner
Review:
I do hope you continue this story - it's lighthearted without being silly, and you do a great job with Draco's attitude.
Review By [banner] • Date [16 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven: Deadly Dating" from ZLB
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I like this so far can't wait for more.
Review By [ZLB] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven: Deadly Dating" from NaiveGhost
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Thanks for the update.

Keep writing!

;-)
Review By [NaiveGhost] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven: Deadly Dating" from Bunney
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LOL, I am on a similar writing schedule. I liked it, even if i long for real dawn draco action but it is a good story.

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [12 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven: Deadly Dating" from GoldenRat
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Nifty fic. I like Dawn and Dracos' interaction.
Review By [GoldenRat] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven: Deadly Dating" from HarmMarie
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I loved the ending of this chapter.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven: Deadly Dating" from purrfus
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Waiting for fan fic updates gives us all a reason to get out of bed in the morning, so take as long as you as long as it is finished before I can't get out of bed anymore ; )

The Dawn is going well, and the Draco is intriguing. At first I was thinking he might be a little too ooc, but if you think about it JKR really didn't do too much character development, so almost anything goes.

Keep the car.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Love is in the Air" from Looneyboyo
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Not too bad. Dawn's fairly accurate, and whilst Draco reads totally OOC to me, I still like the way he's written so it's nae big deal. Other than that, you seem to have spotted most of the major problems, although I would like to see them settle down a bit, the story's getting a bit episodic, and I think that detracts from it a tad
Review By [Looneyboyo] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Love is in the Air" from willayork
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huh. that's pretty interesting, tho i find it hard to believe that Lucious cant find draco. and i loved buffy's reaction both to dawns leaving and missing her in NYC. i kinda wish that your spike was alive still (maybe with more of a delay so that dawn didnt know? or maybe he didnt pop back up at Wolfram and hart?) and he could track her down and kinda help them both out.

and for a pair of run-away 16 yr olds they're doing pretty good on their own.
(do you realize how much money they're loosing everytime they have to start over and leave the deposit and last month and all that by not having time to tell their (mysteriously absent) landlords?!?!)
Review By [willayork] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Love is in the Air" from MistressTitania
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I'm so glad your working on this story again. Dawn/Draco is becoming my otp het pairing I think. Hehehe, I've stayed up all night reading all the Dawn/Draco fics here, and yours is still one of my favs. *tosses chocolate, roses, wine, soda, pizza, whatever the muse will eat to get more chapters*
Review By [MistressTitania] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Love is in the Air" from zafaran
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I like how you're progressing with this, and I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. If you want to get them out of really-big-city land and still be more or less on the East Coast for a while, may I recommend the area around Asheville, NC. I'm points southwest of there, and we've got river rafting, and all sorts of other interesting jobs they could work at during the late-spring and summer. Keep up the good work on the story.

Zafaran
zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten: Love is in the Air" from EllandrahSylver
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This is an excellent story. I do think you should stop posting your very defensive comments at the ends of the chapters. They're disruptive ot the story, and unneccesary, as well. If someone else doesn't like one of your plot twists, that's tough. If YOU like how your story is going, then run away with it. (Pun intended.) I'm kinda glad that this isn't a romantic fic, though. I like the way you've characterised the two of them, and them getting coupley at this point would ruin the very fun, natural dynamic you've built between them. Kudos to you on a lovely bit of fiction.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [2 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Escape from Boston" from Lin
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Update update woohoo!!
Short updates are better than no updates at all. :D :D :D
I think it would be amusing to actually see some more of Draco doing the "i'm confused about normal stuff...thing" instead of just hearing about it. ..umm...i really liked the letter to Lucius, heh gotta love the fact htat wizards are too old fashioned to be able to track anyone down without the aid of magic detectors. Why in the world was Draco stupid enough to use his wand? Umm..lets see,,,Dawn...can see some definite growth in her personality. Umm...maybe i'm obsessed with Draco too? It would be nice to see a little more dawn..or at least some more interactions between the two of them...maybe show dawn introducing draco to something normal...like a rock band or something...go to a concert...or sneak into bars..since they are underage and need to get into some underage mischeif after all. I would like to see more of the devious plotting of the golden trio...they always have such nutty ideas of what others are doing..i would love to see some wacked out theory about where Draco is. Umm...ok...i gotta stop this..'cause its not my business to tell you what to write...i can just see so mcuh fun happning in this story...mmm...yes...got my brain working. :D
Oh...you mentioned that you have never been to America...so...umm..lets see...in america they don't call them flats....americans call them apartments. :: shrugs:: kinda nitpicky..but figured i would tell you all the same.
Review By [Lin] • Date [20 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Escape from Boston" from purrfus
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Welcome back :)

The story has a fun setup with lots of potential. You already know you have problems with grammar and spelling, but part of that could be the difference between British English and American English.

I have to agree with Dawn. I think leaving a note for Lucius was a mistake, because next time the aurors probably wont provide any warning.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [20 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine: Escape from Boston" from khimeraus
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Welcome back Princess.i waiting for an update for...i don't know, two years?
I really hope you continue this because is it a very amazing as story about the characters and not some monster.
Great work even if small.

A.G.
Review By [khimeraus] • Date [19 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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