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Review of chapter "Coming For You" from PrincessTai
Review:
lmao
Oh snap!
Believe me you Cho was the LAST person that went through my mind
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [10 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6. What Lies In the Past" from InchPrincess
Review:
this is so good and i like it so much i love the way youve portrayed the characters and i really wish you would continue it even though its been more then a year since your last update. please continue this it is too good to be left unfinished
Review By [InchPrincess] • Date [19 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "6. What Lies In the Past" from banner
Review:
Wow.
This story is great. I'm loving Millicent.
Review By [banner] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4: The Path Given" from banner
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This is new, and exciting. I like the way you're using lesser-known characters. It's interesting.
Review By [banner] • Date [24 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming For You" from pari
Review:
Oh, goodness :) The possibilities here are wonderful! What the PTB have planned for Cho, how Doyle fits in at Hogwarts (Ha! I can only imagine!), if Angel will find out about him and how that will effect what happens to the AI gang... I wish you would continue this :) This bit is nice, and a long fic would be phenomenal :) What a brilliant idea!
Review By [pari] • Date [25 Mar 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3: Denials are a Girl’s Best Friend" from HolyCon
Review:
this is a great story please up date soon i want to know whats going to happen (and whats witht he voices millies hearing what are they i dont reconize them from angel or buffy)
Review By [HolyCon] • Date [11 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3: Denials are a Girl’s Best Friend" from Ezmerelda
Review:
Very interesting...now that you know where you're going with this, I can't wait to see it. Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [10 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3: Denials are a Girl’s Best Friend" from cwolf
Review:
Glad to see the new chapter.

As for the cliffhanger, it actually gives more of a reason to look for the next chapter, so don't mind the one threatening to hit you over the head.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. But never fear, I didn't mind the threat my muse refused to let me work on it.
I'm working on the next installment right now.
~J
Review By [cwolf] • Date [10 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2: Visions Of Sugar Plums Dancing" from glitzydancingshoes
Review:
Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow.

Wow.

Now, excuse while I go and get a club to beat you to death with for leaving like that! It's like a frickin' permenant cliff-hanger, going from one sudden ending to the next. Not that that's a bad thing, but still! Arghle!
Review By [glitzydancingshoes] • Date [24 Nov 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2: Visions Of Sugar Plums Dancing" from Ezmerelda
Review:
No Way - You cannot run up to a cliffhanger like that then intimate in your Author's note that you might not continue...well, I guess you could do so, but it would be terribly upsetting to your readers who, like me, are interesting in seeing where you go with this. I, personally, want to see Cho written in a better light than JKR gave her, and this story seems to fit the bill, not to mention the fact that I just adore Doyle!

So, please, please, please continue...I'm sure you'll gather more readers before too long.

Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming For You" from zili
Review:
Hell yeah
Review By [zili] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1. Seeing More Clearly" from glitzydancingshoes
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Yay! Good to see another chapter to this, and you managed to keep Doyle very much in character. It seemed odd for him to have a vision about so small a thing as Creevy being beaten up, but -shrug-. I'm sure there's a reason.
Review By [glitzydancingshoes] • Date [12 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming For You" from glitzydancingshoes
Review:
Woah! Great, original story there. Admittedly, Cho seems a little young to be picked out by the powers, but Slayers are even younger, right? I'd love to see this fic continued, as Doyle is a great and yet under-used character, but it's also amazing as a stand-alone as well.
Review By [glitzydancingshoes] • Date [14 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1. Seeing More Clearly" from EyesOfGold
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This is so great, very original. We don't get enough Doyle fics and we hardly ever seen any of the other Characters from HP. I think this story has a great amount of potential. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Love the interactions so far, lol.
Well, I'll be around, keep up the good work.
~EyesOfGold
Review By [EyesOfGold] • Date [14 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming For You" from bookfanatic
Review:
I loved this chapter! We don't see enough Doyle. I would love for you to turn this into a longer story.
Review By [bookfanatic] • Date [10 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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