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Review of chapter "Revelations" from meteoricshipyards
Review:
Very nice. You switch between characters well, and really move the plot along.

I hope you update this. It's an enjoyable story.

Tom A.
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [28 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dinner Talk" from meteoricshipyards
Review:
That was an *excellent* chapter.

Thank you,

Tom A.
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [19 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revealed" from meteoricshipyards
Review:
Chapter 6 from Lex' point of view, and chapter 7 from Clarks were great!

"My wife is a crazy, violent, lesbian, witch" - loved how the phrase just kept growing.

Hope you continue this soon.

Tom A.
Review By [meteoricshipyards] • Date [19 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from (Past Donor)Kanzaki
Review:
Awww, so sad that this was never finished...
Review By [(Past Donor)Kanzaki] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from Rune
Review:
This is good.

Hmm, I say that alot, but then if the story is less than a 7 in my opinion it does not get a review.

Anyway the story is good, but unfinished. Still I'm having fun playing with the idea of a Buffy/Smallville cross in my head.

What if the Scooby gang somehow went to Vegas right after highschool? Like the summer after? And lets make the ages the same, have everyone graduate at the same time. What would Lex be like if he had become a Scooby? Clark could have helped fight Glory, Lex could finance the new Watchers, think of a Lex firmly on the side of Good.

As far as this story goes, Chloe put billionare as the third descriptor, first was handsome, then intelligent. Think of a Lex with a Good Wife, Pulitzer Journalist. Really what's more rare, Pulitzer Prize winners or rich people? I can see Chloe as very good for Lex.

Now please finish this story.
Review By [Rune] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from Elenea
Review:
''Oh god. I think I'm getting a crush on my wife.''

Oh my, that line is soo funny!

I hope you have plans to continue.. I really like this!
Review By [Elenea] • Date [2 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from MistressRed
Review:
I like it so far :) Do you ever plan on continuing?
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from Kirallie
Review:
Isn't it a good thing if he has a crush on his wife? Is Willow pregnant?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [31 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from FiveOfFive
Review:
Holy oh my God! This is fabulous!

There were so many lines that made me smother laughter in an attempt to not wake the sleeping members of my family, this story is hilarious. You've also managed to put in some great tension, which means I'm biting my lip in worry while trying not to giggle too loudly, the end result being I almost swallow my tongue.... I love how you've portrayed everyone, all the characters seem true to the spirit of the original shows, and I adore the Lex/Chloe relationship. Quick question, I get why they're not sleeping together, but will we ever get Willow/Clark love? I know we probably will, but I want smoochies! :-)

Like I said there have been some pretty amazing lines in this, but "My wife is a crazy, violent, lesbian witch who might be pregnant... I'm so completely screwed" and "Oh God! I think I'm getting a crush on my wife!" were the primary causes of accidental almost tongue swallowing. Also, Martha's whole "My 18 year old son got drunk and married a stranger in Vegas, now they're moving in with us and will be home in time for supper... I should make pie!" was awesome! I still can't think about it without cracking-up :-D
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from spring
Review:
Thank you so very much for updating this very very interesting fic. I think it has some very hellarious parts, two of wich were when Lex and Willow were having the "pretty" conversation the other when Willow wasteasing Clark about his mom. I love this fic and I really hope that you are able to update this again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from Vornae
Review:
Pretty interesting story. Are there any plans to see it though to the end.
Review By [Vornae] • Date [11 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from Red
Review:
I love it, I can't wait for more. It would be funny when Angel and Spike meet Clark for the first time.
Review By [Red] • Date [18 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revelations" from queenevil
Review:
THANKS! I have been waiting for this update for forever - looking for your fanfic ending was how I actually stumbled ontothis site. thanks btw. I love the last line!!!!
Review By [queenevil] • Date [14 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from (Past Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
The very last line rules!!!!


I really hope you update this again soon please...


Cheers
MJ
Review By [(Past Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revelations" from Suzanne
Review:
Clark getting a crush on his wife.. awwwwww so sweet.. Glad to see this updated, I really like this story alot:)
Review By [Suzanne] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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