Hmm, I say that alot, but then if the story is less than a 7 in my opinion it does not get a review.
Anyway the story is good, but unfinished. Still I'm having fun playing with the idea of a Buffy/Smallville cross in my head.
What if the Scooby gang somehow went to Vegas right after highschool? Like the summer after? And lets make the ages the same, have everyone graduate at the same time. What would Lex be like if he had become a Scooby? Clark could have helped fight Glory, Lex could finance the new Watchers, think of a Lex firmly on the side of Good.
As far as this story goes, Chloe put billionare as the third descriptor, first was handsome, then intelligent. Think of a Lex with a Good Wife, Pulitzer Journalist. Really what's more rare, Pulitzer Prize winners or rich people? I can see Chloe as very good for Lex.
Now please finish this story.
Review By [Rune] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
There were so many lines that made me smother laughter in an attempt to not wake the sleeping members of my family, this story is hilarious. You've also managed to put in some great tension, which means I'm biting my lip in worry while trying not to giggle too loudly, the end result being I almost swallow my tongue.... I love how you've portrayed everyone, all the characters seem true to the spirit of the original shows, and I adore the Lex/Chloe relationship. Quick question, I get why they're not sleeping together, but will we ever get Willow/Clark love? I know we probably will, but I want smoochies! :-)
Like I said there have been some pretty amazing lines in this, but "My wife is a crazy, violent, lesbian witch who might be pregnant... I'm so completely screwed" and "Oh God! I think I'm getting a crush on my wife!" were the primary causes of accidental almost tongue swallowing. Also, Martha's whole "My 18 year old son got drunk and married a stranger in Vegas, now they're moving in with us and will be home in time for supper... I should make pie!" was awesome! I still can't think about it without cracking-up :-D
Review By [FiveOfFive] • Date [10 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Thank you so very much for updating this very very interesting fic. I think it has some very hellarious parts, two of wich were when Lex and Willow were having the "pretty" conversation the other when Willow wasteasing Clark about his mom. I love this fic and I really hope that you are able to update this again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [25 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
THANKS! I have been waiting for this update for forever - looking for your fanfic ending was how I actually stumbled ontothis site. thanks btw. I love the last line!!!!
Review By [queenevil] • Date [14 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
::giggles:: That sounds so weird, but it's funny. Actually, this entire thing is really funny and quirky. I can't wait for more. Please hurry with the updates! Pretty please with a cherry on top? ^^ I'll be keeping an eye out! ^_~
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [9 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Nice pickup. Sometimes when a story goes a while between updates it can be pretty obvious that the writer is older and in a different place. This story doesn't have that kinda of jarring split.
Wonderful work with the Willow. You've done a great job with Lex and Chloe, and thats saying a lot because I can't stand Chloe.
When I was skimming through the reviews, I saw one that didn't think pregnancy was possible. If demons and vampires can have babies with humans....
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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