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But We Already Have a Geek...

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Review of chapter "But We Already Have a Geek..." from (Current Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
OK never heard of 'She Spies' so the intro was helpful.

Unfortunately choosing this as a 'Twenty Minute Fic' or whatever was a bad choice. This sounds like the opening chapter of a much, much longer fic, and as such it might have worked...I would have probably read it. But as a short fic it doesn't work. Nothing happens! A short fic should be...well...short and snappy! As I say this sounds like an introduction to something bigger and likely better.

Oh-well, better luck next time eh?

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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