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When in Rome

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Review of chapter "When in Rome" from bradsan
Review:
if you write a one-shot it has to be finished and this story feels more like a start to something good then a story with an end. So it feels unfinished. If you think of writing a sequel or a second chapter, well then it would make sense for now I want to read more because it doesn't feel like I read the end of it more like a cliffhanger.

I hope you will write a sequel or another chapter to finish the story.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When in Rome" from Carojen
Review:
It doesn't feel finished, and I'd really like to hear thst msn's reaction to someone taking granny's visions seriously. Here's hoping for more.
Review By [Carojen] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When in Rome" from ChaoticFred
Review:
Very, very interesting. I'm curious to find out where you're gonna go w/ this. So many possibilities. *cackles evilly*
Comments from author:
It's supposed to be a one-shot. Really. *tries to ignore the large outline for the next chapter that's lying unfinished on the hard disk.* Really.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [ChaoticFred] • Date [15 Apr 04] • Not Rated
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