Review of chapter "When in Rome" from bradsan
if you write a one-shot it has to be finished and this story feels more like a start to something good then a story with an end. So it feels unfinished. If you think of writing a sequel or a second chapter, well then it would make sense for now I want to read more because it doesn't feel like I read the end of it more like a cliffhanger.
I hope you will write a sequel or another chapter to finish the story.
Review By [bradsan
] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When in Rome" from Carojen
It doesn't feel finished, and I'd really like to hear thst msn's reaction to someone taking granny's visions seriously. Here's hoping for more.
Review By [Carojen
] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When in Rome" from ChaoticFred
Very, very interesting. I'm curious to find out where you're gonna go w/ this. So many possibilities. *cackles evilly*
Comments from author:
It's supposed to be a one-shot. Really. *tries to ignore the large outline for the next chapter that's lying unfinished on the hard disk.* Really.
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [ChaoticFred
] • Date [15 Apr 04] • Not Rated