Review of chapter "Pretty Meal" from DeepBlueJoy
Interesting... wish it had been longer. funny how Highlander moves ended up saving Amanda. part of me wishes they could meet again and again over the years as Amanda slowly discovers her truth. Wonder what happens if you give a highlander vampire blood (attempt to turn them)
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pretty Meal" from Hecatonchires
I love a Drusilla story. No mention of Miss Edith, but thats becoming cliche these days ^_^
Comments from author:
Exactly. I really couldn't find a way to fit Miss Edith into the story, especially in only 20 minutes, so I decided to leave it out.
Truth be told, while I liked writing this story I was kind of sorry I chose to do it as a "20 minutes" story. I had a great story in my head but with such a short time what I wrote ended up feeling like a rushed version of the story I actually wanted to tell.
I think it was good but the flashback and Amanda's being captured were both things I originally planned to write in much more detail but didn't have the time.
That is part of the nature of the 20 minute challenges and why I like them. But in this case I kind of wish it had been a "60 minute" challenge.
Review By [Hecatonchires
] • Date [19 Apr 04] • Not Rated