Oooookayyy.... That is just too weird. Willow and Creed???? Don’t know if I like this pairing or not. Have to see more first. Next chapter?????
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just as It Should Be" from keki
Review:
Willow and Sabertooth, can't wait to see how that goes. Interesting pairing. Sabertooth's a verrry big boy.
Hope Kennedy gets paid back for this wish. Waiting for the next chappie.
peace, keki
Review By [keki] • Date [28 Apr 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just as It Should Be" from houses
Review:
This continues to be an interesting premise, though I'm not sure why Buffy was there, or whether she was necessary to the story. I'm glad Willow had second thoughts about marrying a killer, and it was very in character for D'Hoffryn to not give a flying fig and marry her off anyway. I look foward to seeing what Sabertooths' reaction will be when the story comes out--and whether this marriage will last.
first - can I hope that something dreadful - even if 'only' the wrath of the Scoobies will fall on Kennedy for making that wish?
secondly... this is definitely a different premise for a crossover. I'm not quite certain how smoothly it will work, but it's off to an interesting start and I look forward to watching it unfold.
third - I just keep snickering as I imagine Sabertooth's reaction. I mean, he's probably had dozens (at least) of people suspended by their throats, and I really doubt that asking him to marry them is the normal response. PLEASE give us the reaction to that question?
as for the pairing itself... It's definitely unusual. Not something that I would have really pictured before, but it has the potential for a lot of friction - I just don't know if that will be good friction to keep things interesting or bad friction to make someone get killed as a 'till death do us part'.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [19 Apr 04] • Not Rated
For whatever reason, despite not quite buying the characterization of Willow so far, this story intrigues me. A part of my discomfort with her portrayal could be that I've only got one chapter to judge from so far, so a few more chapters may smooth out the rough edges. A good twist on the When I Woke Up genre of stories, forcing Willow to do the choosing. I like her choice of 'husband', I've got a soft spot for Sabertooth, and the fact that he was very much Sabertooth yet she asked him anyway was amusing. Thought it was a nice touch to have D'Hoffryn wary and a bit inclined to bend to Willow's whim. All in all, a great start and I'm looking forward to more.
Interesting and odd. I'd hope there's more than this part, of course. Also not really sure if reckless killer guy is the man for Willow, but hey, its your fantasy.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Apr 04] • Not Rated