Brilliant.

Its now may 2007 if your still around please finish this interesting story

uh...L why didn't willow truth spell checked john?
Weird....

good. now it makes me want to hope you are oging to finish it, someday.

Dejmal,
I really enjoyed the story. Kudos for your first story in English. Please finish it.

Interesting. Tho... I’m a bit confused about the last two chapters. Are they supposed to be a true continuation of the whole story or is that just an experiment to see how people would like it??? Personally, not too fond of it, tho I always like to see more of Tara. I hope to see more of this story soon.

Great work!!!! It was very good to see some detail to Dawn mission and I would LOVE to read much more!! (I love to see the NID put in their place!)

Very good story. I really like some of your ideas and i like the way it takes place like acts of a television programme.

I have just come to the end of Kill Will Vol.1 and cannot wait until you publish the next chapter/ volume to read the conclusion.

That was WILD. The Vamp-Goul'd was creepy beyond belief, and I certainly don't like the idea of killing all those people off. But I trust you to make it work. I'll be reading everything you write with that in mind.

Oh, but by the way, 'information' is both the singular and the plural. There is no such word in English as 'informations.'

Thanks for the information. :-)
Hm ... not killing all these people ... there is this problem with me being evil, but I'll try.

Yes, please do explain. I currently am getting a headache, and can't figure out what the heck is going on here. How did Amy get to be so strong? What's up with Dawn? Yep, I can't wait for the next update. =]

Still a misused homonym or two, I believe there was a misspelling or two to match, and tense changes near the top and bottom. Getting better though.

Thanks. I try.

Quick question-why does John say (as Jack) he never really looks at the stars but in canon he specifically has a telescope and often goes to watch the stars from his house?

He does? Hm...I've never noticed. I guess it's too late to pretend it wasn't really Jack's house and the telescope was part of MGM's evil plan to make us belive Jack has one, isn't it? :-)

Well, I can tell that you are an X-files fan, since that chapter made me feel the same way some of the conspiracy episodes did. Basically, uh . . . huh? I got it, but I don't get it. Just leaves me hanging on for more, I suppose. Great job there. =]

I'm getting an uneasy feeling that the whole world iis a fake, or has been brought in from another dimension. Weird...

Well, when I was starting the story I made up about twenty different reasons why there could be two Earths in one universe: various spells, other dimensions, alternate realities, changed timeline, it's all a dream, virtual reality (a sort of Matrix kind of thing)...To be honest, all of these theories were weird. For example one of those was to say Buffy's Earth was brought there by Anubis from the past and her people are actually the ancients. I wanted to kill the whole Earth's population in the end of the story and let Buffy and her friends ascend :-)
So I stopped thinking about the reason and started thinking about which one has the biggest influence on the characters and of course I chose the one that will make most readers angry :-)

Five by five refers to a code used by military radio officers to evaluate a radio signal. They'd rate a radio signal on strength and clarity on a scale of one to five. A one by one signal meant it was really weak and with a lot of interference. Five by five meant a strong signal without static.

One of the SG-1 support staff could probably tell Jack what 'five by five' means.

Thanks for explaining. I had no idea what five by five means when I wrote the chapter, I thought it's something Faith made up.