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Review of chapter "After the battle" from RainbowCubes
Review:
Love the quote at the end. Spike's such a bad influence and I love that about him.
Review By [RainbowCubes] • Date [4 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Update" from dugleikoo
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Brilliant.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Update" from Traveler
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Its now may 2007 if your still around please finish this interesting story
Review By [Traveler] • Date [14 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Impressions" from arkeus
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uh...L why didn't willow truth spell checked john?
Weird....
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Forming Alliance-prologue" from arkeus
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good. now it makes me want to hope you are oging to finish it, someday.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [18 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Update" from debio
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Dejmal,
I really enjoyed the story. Kudos for your first story in English. Please finish it.
Review By [debio] • Date [10 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Update" from LadyCarpathian
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Interesting. Tho... I’m a bit confused about the last two chapters. Are they supposed to be a true continuation of the whole story or is that just an experiment to see how people would like it??? Personally, not too fond of it, tho I always like to see more of Tara. I hope to see more of this story soon.
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [6 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hide and Seek" from Banditcat
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Great work!!!! It was very good to see some detail to Dawn mission and I would LOVE to read much more!! (I love to see the NID put in their place!)
Review By [Banditcat] • Date [2 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balance" from pinkyboy
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Very good story. I really like some of your ideas and i like the way it takes place like acts of a television programme.

I have just come to the end of Kill Will Vol.1 and cannot wait until you publish the next chapter/ volume to read the conclusion.
Review By [pinkyboy] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Initial point" from Cutiepie
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That was WILD. The Vamp-Goul'd was creepy beyond belief, and I certainly don't like the idea of killing all those people off. But I trust you to make it work. I'll be reading everything you write with that in mind.

Oh, but by the way, 'information' is both the singular and the plural. There is no such word in English as 'informations.'
Comments from author:
Thanks for the information. :-)
Hm ... not killing all these people ... there is this problem with me being evil, but I'll try.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [31 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puzzle pieces-part 3" from Cutiepie
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Yes, please do explain. I currently am getting a headache, and can't figure out what the heck is going on here. How did Amy get to be so strong? What's up with Dawn? Yep, I can't wait for the next update. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [22 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puzzle pieces-part 3" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
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Still a misused homonym or two, I believe there was a misspelling or two to match, and tense changes near the top and bottom. Getting better though.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I try.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [21 Jul 04] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puzzle pieces-part 3" from raven
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Quick question-why does John say (as Jack) he never really looks at the stars but in canon he specifically has a telescope and often goes to watch the stars from his house?
Comments from author:
He does? Hm...I've never noticed. I guess it's too late to pretend it wasn't really Jack's house and the telescope was part of MGM's evil plan to make us belive Jack has one, isn't it? :-)
Review By [raven] • Date [21 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puzzle pieces-part 2" from Cutiepie
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Well, I can tell that you are an X-files fan, since that chapter made me feel the same way some of the conspiracy episodes did. Basically, uh . . . huh? I got it, but I don't get it. Just leaves me hanging on for more, I suppose. Great job there. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [11 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puzzle pieces-part 2" from MarcusRowland
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I'm getting an uneasy feeling that the whole world iis a fake, or has been brought in from another dimension. Weird...
Comments from author:
Well, when I was starting the story I made up about twenty different reasons why there could be two Earths in one universe: various spells, other dimensions, alternate realities, changed timeline, it's all a dream, virtual reality (a sort of Matrix kind of thing)...To be honest, all of these theories were weird. For example one of those was to say Buffy's Earth was brought there by Anubis from the past and her people are actually the ancients. I wanted to kill the whole Earth's population in the end of the story and let Buffy and her friends ascend :-)
So I stopped thinking about the reason and started thinking about which one has the biggest influence on the characters and of course I chose the one that will make most readers angry :-)
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [11 Jul 04] • Not Rated
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