"cardboard characters and mundane plot"??? I'm afraid that I'm with Teal'c, I'll never get tired of classic Star Wars. Apart from that attack on a series of great films, that was another excellent chapter to an excellent story. I loved your characterisation of Anya and Xander's threat made me laugh out loud. I look forward to reading more.
Just one little thing; Tea'c almost never calls Jack 'colonal', just 'O'Neil'. He also has a very formal or stilted way of speaking, for instance *younsters* he would most likely use the word *youths*.
Anyways, great chapter. One step closer to having Buffy & Jack meet up. Should be interesting.
“Buff. They looked mostly human, and they drank coffee no problem. And they liked Star Wars. So I’m going to go with not altogether evil. We just thought you should know.” Lol! I loved the "not altogether evil" part. I hope the Colonel and "Murry" enjoy meeting She Who Hangs Out in Cemetaries". This is a very nice story, by the way, and I can't wait for more. Nifty job with everyones' characters, so far. Lol!
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Lovely! I enjoy how you are giving Teal'c a vacation using the skills he trained in for leadership (rather than being reliable team member), but he gets to use them for the forces of good this time.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 May 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Nice, I just wish the chapters were longer. Can't wait for Jack & the Bufster to meet.
They alot a like when you think about it; both are usaully ready with a quip, both can think on their feet, neither plays well with authority (at least when they're clueless nits). And both like to blow things up (motherships, high-schools....).
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [27 Apr 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Very interesting take on a SG1 xover. I like the pair you sent to Sunnydale, as well as how they're adjusting. Let me tell you, I adore Graham Miller, so the more of him the better. Cute comment on how she can't drive yet--wait till Jack gets a look at her, he'll be mortified. Looking forward to more.