Review of chapter "Another One" from Skyefather
ok maybe its me I've never read the verse that your crossing over with here, so the story was really hard to follow and it didn't make much since to me. got here by way of the no more zero link
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. The story is also the second in a four part series... so would be harder to follow than perhaps the previous story.
Review By [Skyefather
] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]