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Review of chapter "Scars" from SamuraiSky
Review:
Excellent story! Took me a couple of days to read through it, but I didn't want to put it down.
Review By [SamuraiSky] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scars" from Rune
Review:
If I can ever write a story, and I have tried before, but if I can get one DONE, then I'm writing a Dark Harry Potter. Most of the idiots will die, some by the hand of Harry himself, others when Justice is done. I'll bring in the Goddess of Magic and strip quite a few of the witless wizards of their power, for all time they and any children will be muggles. The outright willful stupidity and foolishness shown by all too many in the Harry Potter world makes me mad, Mad, MAD, M!A!D!!!

At least you killed draco...
Review By [Rune] • Date [9 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Suspicions and Vigilance" from PrincessTaffy
Review:
Hey, I know this is one of your older stories, and I've read your newer ones and loved them, however I just wanted to point out that you have a few spelling errors, for example Huddlepuff instead of Hufflepuff, Voldermort instead of Voldemort, Trawnaly instead of Trelawney. I know that these aren't exactly spell-checkable, so I just wanted to give you a heads-up!
Comments from author:
Thanks - the whole thing needs a complete overhaul really. It's on my list! x
Review By [PrincessTaffy] • Date [2 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scars" from Obsidian
Review:
AWESOME! AWESOME STORY! FINALLY a story with voldeworts dieing about damn time. Thanks.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scars" from TheHunter
Review:
Do another, you have a gift don't squander it.
Comments from author:
Thank you. The second story is online, but currently incomplete. I hope you like it. Kx
Review By [TheHunter] • Date [13 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Letters" from TheHunter
Review:
I'll admit that I was taken off guard when Harry wrote to Sirius, but you ended it beautifully.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Kx
Review By [TheHunter] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scars" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Pretty cool. Good job at following the main characters, I thought that maybe Jayden and some of the other adults deserved some epilog time. I can see Willow maybe taking a look at Giles' head via magic to make sure there's no long-lasting results of his injry.
Comments from author:
Thanks- I agree with you on the ending. I'll have to add something in. Kara.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prophecy Girls (except for Harry; who is, of course, a Prophecy Guy)" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The battles are very complex, and well done for that. They could be a little more clear in a "visual" sense, but there was enough information to follow along in most cases.
Comments from author:
Thanks- when I get around to the rewrite, I'll try and add more detail. I know fight scenes aren't ,my strong point.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End is Nigh" from VillageOrchid
Review:
That bit with Draco was very well done. I wanted to believe he wasn't responsible, too.
Overall some nice characterization and storytelling... and forwarding the plot.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Kx
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kidnapped" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The big V is a better planner than usual in your fic. Also any thought that maybe Faith was just picking up a pregnancy test or other feminine hygene products at the chemists?
Comments from author:
I figure he's got to have quite a few smarts to be able to keep the wizarding world on the run aaround for so long. Glad you're still reading!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "and Preparations" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I did think "making a rat sing" was a little odd... and then you gave it a nice big twist. i am amused.
Comments from author:
Good!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
The plot continues to be interesting... and driving the story right now... with just a few pauses for the character moments.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecies," from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying the complex parts... and realizing that maybe I did read a few chapters of this story in its earlier/earliest incarnation... I didn't remember it though, and doubt I read more than a few chapters. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks- it has been posted for a good few years here and longer at ff.net so it's very possible you read bits a long time ago. I'm always rediscovering stories that I've read long ago and forgotten. x
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When we needed you" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some intense and unexpected plot developments. Always like it when something unexpected happens. Worried, of course, for the students who have been prisonors (hostages?) for the last week. But I guess that means you're doing effective storytelling.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Metaphorical Dancing" from VillageOrchid
Review:
That was sweet, and yes I'm in the camp that maybe, just maybe Hermione could have had a choice between Ravenclaw and Gryph - so maybe instead of becoming a victim, she'll be able to consider being a watcher... or at least a good fray-adajacent scrappy!
Comments from author:
She's definitely smart enough to be a raven.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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