Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from Glumski
Okay story, I guess. The plot is really good, though some parts are a little sketchy. Some characters are well done (Dawn for example), others seem to be a little one dimensional (like Buffy). The formatting and language could use a lot of work; I don't know how TTH looked ten years ago and spellcheck probably didn't work too well back then so I guess there's that. All in all it's a good concept and definitely worth the time, though some polishing might improve this quite a lot.
Review By [Glumski
] • Date [14 Jul 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from WildMartin
It was a good story. The only real problem I had was that in chapter 4 you wrote “Faith’s in a bad way, they don’t think she’ll ever walk again even with her slayer healing.” but starting in chapter 16 she's there with the others to fight.
Review By [WildMartin
] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from maxthehobbit
Well I doubt you'll ever finish this story since it's been 7 years. Probably don't even look at reviews, guess you just lost interest, too bad not many Dawn stories around.
Review By [maxthehobbit
] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from apollo
Are you ever planning on finishing this? I think 5 years is a bit more than a "slight delay."
Comments from author:
probably not is the honest answer.
unless i get a strike of inspiration.
Review By [apollo
] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from desartartt
yup, you left Buffy and Spike fighting. a good cliff hanger. I just discovered your web page, and am looking forward to reading more of your stories.
Review By [desartartt
] • Date [20 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from dugleikoo
Review By [dugleikoo
] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from rocky
you know that story so far is really good but because of the formating on the tth your loosing thoughts with the shift ,. could you edit them out or send me an email at firstname.lastname@example.org with the story because Shaun though sadly with no thoughts there is getting rather frustrating to read
Review By [rocky
] • Date [5 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from SamJames
Excellent story. I loved the exchanges between Fred and Carter and how you had Dawn save the day by using energy from the stargate.
Review By [SamJames
] • Date [10 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from purrfus
Just found this story. I hope you find the muse to finish it sometime soon.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [17 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from skychan
While this story is entertaining I think that you have managed to sway a bit further afield of the reactions many of the cast should probably be having in some of the situations. A few just feel off.
Review By [skychan
] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from grouchie
i have just found your story i think you have done a good job and the name changes is no problem i can understand you wanting something different sometimes it does get a little confusing with jack and the clone you seem to have made him his own person so far
Review By [grouchie
] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from debio
I really enjoyed the story. The characters were well done. I was confused for a little while about the Shaun name but after a couple of chapters I forgot about it being weird... lol. More please!
Review By [debio
] • Date [17 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from Angrycupcake
I've read you're first three chapters and I gotta say they are really engaging. I've never been a fan of Dawn but I find it amazing how much I like her when she's Fanfic!Dawn. It's probably cause the stories I occasionally read that feature don't turn her into a whiney brat. Good job on that btw.
I liked the Shaun reveal.
On the one hand I don't think it's realistic that Dawn would spill her guts like that but than I remember that characters on the show have done just that so um whatever carry on.
Buffy completely turning her back on the last ten years of her life may seem harsh but I think it's completely in character given the way tptb had her acting the final two seasons.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. hopefully i'll get round to finishing this one soon
Review By [Angrycupcake
] • Date [17 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from LadyCarpathian
This is quite the treat!!! I notice the final piece hasn’t been posted yet and the last update was June of 04. When are we gonna get to finish it??????????????
Comments from author:
Review By [LadyCarpathian
] • Date [19 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from NotAGoauld
This wa a great story!!! I don't know where to start. It was well thought out. It had everything romance, action, humor, angst just everything. The only problem I saw was there were a lot of misspellings that tended to disrupt the flow of the story. Otherwise it was excellent. Thanks for an awesome story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [NotAGoauld
] • Date [11 Nov 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]