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Review of chapter "Welcome" from spk
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I just found this story, and I love the idea of a Buffy/Snape pairing. Definitely an intriguing start. I hope that you are doing okay and I'm sorry to hear about your loss. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Good-Bye" from purrfus
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Its nice that you set the readers minds at ease by settling Dawn.

It is interesting so far, and I am glad you've come back to this, but when you have a minute please read the story through from the beginning. Some of the spelling and grammar jarred me out of the story.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome" from mithrilandtj
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sounds fun.
do More!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome" from CrushedRosez
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The death of someone you know can really knock you out of the writing biz for awhile. I know. I just got back into after my dad died. Keep writing. It helps.

As for the actual writing, I think it could use a little clean up. I noticed you jumped around tense wise a little.
Review By [CrushedRosez] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory" from spring
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more please
Review By [spring] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory" from spring
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intresting so far PLEASE update this fic again!
Review By [spring] • Date [19 May 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory" from iceyflame
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Hey. I think your story is pretty good so far. Well, I would love for Buffy to either get with Snape, or Remus. Anyways, update soon. Please!
Review By [iceyflame] • Date [26 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory" from undead
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uh, dude? decide which tense you're going to stick with. and the delivery? needs a LOT of work. even a rewrite could be necessary.
Review By [undead] • Date [14 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory" from raven
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I like the idea of them both falling through, but you need to clean this chapter up a bit-many spelling and syntax errors. Not sure that I would decide a pairing this soon, although if the celebration at the beginning is what I think it is, the two mentioned would certainly have something in common.
Review By [raven] • Date [23 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory" from Shizuka
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Pair her with Severus, please? This won't just be fun to write, it will be interesting... Maybe it will be a challenge as well... Severus' general distrust of strangers and Buffy's defensive attitude, he snarl at her and she snarl back... After all Severus need a woman who ain't going to be afraid of his sharp tongue and dark past, someone who will look past his steel defensive walls and realize that no matter what he had done in the past, he had repented and tried his very best to help the good side. Buffy's sharp wit and tongue is more than on par to his, and she had broke through Angel's soul induced guilt and look past his even darker past to love him.

And Buffy need a man who will stuck to her through thick and thin, someone who understand the warrior within her and accept her for who she is, someone who can protect himself and don't need her to worry too much, someone who can see through her self denial and her sometimes hateful words. Severus's stubborness and his loyalty is what she need, as she sometimes said things that she didn't mean. He had been through physical and emotional tortures to gather information for Dumbledore, and he will endure the same and stand by her. And his position as a spy let him understand the paranoia that warrior sometimes have, and he can protect himself so she don't have to worry too much about him.

Well that is just my humble opinion, I'm sorry for babbling... Please pair her with Severus? Pretty please?
Review By [Shizuka] • Date [23 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory" from throwingit
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Yeah Buffy/Snape! Buffy/Snape! anyway other then that this was a great chapter.
Review By [throwingit] • Date [22 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Good-Bye" from (Recent Donor)TannimU
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Hey great intro to this fic! I like how the Scoobs realized that she would not be going to hell! As for pairings, well I'm for one I haven't seen yet, Buffy/Hermione. Keep up the great work!
Review By [(Recent Donor)TannimU] • Date [18 May 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Good-Bye" from throwingit
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Buffy/Snape is my suggestion. Nice chapter you've portrayed their grief very well it's a tricky emotion to do. Well I think it is.
Review By [throwingit] • Date [17 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Good-Bye" from Shizuka
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Snape!!! Pair her with Snape... Seen too many Harry or Sirius pairing... Snape should be a challenge for you...
Review By [Shizuka] • Date [16 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Her Gift" from throwingit
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Hmmm Interesting. Whose Buffy gonna be paired with? pretty good start
Review By [throwingit] • Date [9 May 04] • Not Rated
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