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Review of chapter "The D5" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Great story! Unique way to bring everyone together. Hope we see more soon.
Some small errors - welfare not well fair etc, just needs a little polishing.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The D5" from SecondSilk
Great story. Brilliant premise, simple is good. I thought at first the Scoobies wouldn't be in it, just the chocolate. I loved the way it was introduced via Snape's D-levels of disaster. There are occasional pronoun mistakes, her instead of his, which are confusing, and it's wellfare. But the story itself, and the construction of the chapters work brilliantly. The scoobies were effected, too, hehehe. I liked the oblieque reference to Giles. And the idea of McGonagall and Dumbeldore was disturbing enough, I can't image what it was like for Harry and Hermione. Looking forward to more.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [15 May 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The D5" from PleaseDeleteAccount
This is a brilliant fic. When Malfoy was running from the muggles, I laughed until I cried! Update soon.
Review By [PleaseDeleteAccount] • Date [14 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The D5" from raven
"For that, she could have anything she wished as long as it allowed him to bask in her continued presence." -The new argument for cloning!

Teenage Snape, Luna's creatures, Willow babbles...almost makes up for the image of Dumbledore and McGonnagal. Almost.

Excellent chapter-looking forward to Ethan's scenes...
Comments from author:
"The new argument for cloning!"
XD lol!

Sorry for the image x.X, Didn't mean to frighten ya. Why I didn't go into detail. Just proves, sometimes to leave it up to the readers imagination is so much more effective ^.-

Ethan scenes I'm thinking will be around chapter seven or eight, depending. Don't hold me to that, since I change things around a lot in fics based on what strikes me as it works or doesn't... Anyhoo, he'll be in there though ^.^ Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [raven] • Date [14 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The D5" from Cutiepie
OK, I forgot that Willow, Xander and Buffy no longer qualify as children. My oops. Yep, I am really loving this inventive comedy. And I've managed a bit of the ew-factor regarding Dumbledore and McGonagall. I don't normally find anything wrong with older people showing affection, but then I remember an experience of seeing much more of someone than I ever wanted to, and I get it. =]
Comments from author:
That's alright. In the forums at the challenge, I said the choice for the Scoobies to be affected or not was up to the author. They are still young, which means they regress even more (as you can tell with Buffy). Easy to get the mix up ^.^

I actually think it's sweet when an older couple kiss, hold hands- y'know. But Harry was seeing a lot more than that, and that is a bit squicky for me- so it squicks him too- heh. Just not my piece of cake, that.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [14 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The D5" from Aly
This is absolutely hilarious! I love it! It literally had me rolling on the floor laughing. I was sorta having a bad day, and this just made me giggle and feel happy again. I'm loving the way you're writing all the characters, they're brilliant! You write comedy fantastically; I can't wait for the next part!
Comments from author:
I'm so very glad I could brighten up your dismal day with a few laughs :D Always great to hear that. And thanks for the compliments ^.^ I love writing comedy more than anything else, so I'm happy to hear you enjoy it so much! Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Aly] • Date [14 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The D5" from WitchyGrrl
::shakes head, giggling:: So THAT'S a D5. And the little drinkfest with Ripper and Remus?! God I wish I had enough imagination to wonder what they were talking about...
The Severus/Willow conversation was just adorable!! I love it all!!! I look forward to more chaos!!! (And still praying for that Ethan-bashing!)
Comments from author:
You'll get your Moony & Ripper New Marauders action soon enough, just have to wait an eensy bit longer.

XD Glad you liked the Willow/Sev action. I paid *very* close attention to the dialog (internal and external) there, wanting to get the feel of it right. Glad you liked it ^.^

The Ethan bashing shall come- have no fear on that quarter. Thanks for reviewing again! *beams*
Review By [WitchyGrrl] • Date [14 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tainted Chocolate" from WitchyGrrl
::giggle:: Brilliant once again, especially with the Metallica-ness. :) Loved that.
And the meeping thing is SO cute-Willow!! I haven't heard or read that version of Willow in the longest time. I look forward to more!!!
Comments from author:
Oh, lots more cute Willow :D I love "I'm all fuzzy" ^.^ Metallica fan, eh? I was going to make it Slipknot- but I figured Metallica would be better known.
Review By [WitchyGrrl] • Date [14 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tainted Chocolate" from HeadlessIsadora
'Alfred Was Here- Suck On That!'

Too freakin' funny!
I'm just loving this.
Comments from author:
^.- Glad I can entertain.
Review By [HeadlessIsadora] • Date [14 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tainted Chocolate" from Cutiepie
Whoo hoo! I like it! Can I have some more? Please? Please with a Honeydukes candybar on top? =] This chocolate seems to be a bit different than the previous, since that didn't affect the children, but this is. Maybe instead of making the adults act like children, this recipe just makes everyone forget to be responsible? And why didn't it work on Dawn? Something Key-related? Can't wait for more!!
Comments from author:
Here's more, but unless your underage you shouldn't have any chocolate *wags finger at you*.

It's actually not affecting the children. I have certain aspects of their personalities blown over the top for the humor value ^.- Bit OOC, but this is a comedy, and a little is to be expected. They're still as close to JK's bunch as I can make 'em. Hope that clarifies the candy confusal for yeah (Chapter 4 should as well).

Thanks for your comments! :D
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [13 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tainted Chocolate" from raven
Excellent intersection...Willow meeping? Priceless. Bit disappointed in how uptight Hermione is...but it does rather go with her character. Little thing on the currency-UK is one of 3 members of the EU that have not accepted the Euro as their new currency. They will take both euros and pounds. And the one pound note? Not a note-small, round, gold coin a little smaller (width) but thicker (about the width of two US quarters glued together) than a US quarter. Called a quid-very useful for tube tickets and small purchases.
Comments from author:
Ah. Sorry for the mix-ups. American, not British, so lots are likely to happen. I'll change that in a revision, so thanks so much for telling me! :D If you catch any other mistakes, I'd be greatful if you'd point them out for me ^.^ Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [raven] • Date [13 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That's Really Saying Something" from Runewolf
I loved the D levels that Snape used. Its so Snape, and yet so Dumbledore as well. Dumbledore is a wonderfully kind headmaster, but thinking about it, working for him would be stressful at times, especially for someone like Snape.

It'd drive most adults nuts, actually.

Snape's analysis of the candy is Chapter 2 was also brilliant. Well done.
Comments from author:
I'd think that every time walking into a staff meeting.

"Oh no- he's humming. What's he going to do now?" *fear*

Thanks! I like candy meself, must do it justice. Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [13 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lure" from charliesgyrl
What a great idea! I'm really liking so far, can't wait to see what happens to all the proffesors once the candy kicks in... this is so great! :)
Comments from author:
Oh, the teachers are in trouble all right. Thanks! Glad you like it :D
Review By [charliesgyrl] • Date [13 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lure" from WitchyGrrl
::giggle-snort:: Your characterisations of the HP characters are just bloody fantastic!!! Severus and Dumbledore are...I can't even describe it, it's so funny...And the Dumbledore Scale has to be the most original thing I've ever heard...::cackle::
I really do hope there's some Ethan-bashing. Literal, punch-him-'til-he-whimpers bashing, I mean. I love him, but he really does deserve a good bashing sometimes...:)
I look forward to more!!!
Comments from author:
Ethan's going to get his, don't worry. He does need a good punch in the face, ne? ^.^ Thanks for the review!
Review By [WitchyGrrl] • Date [13 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's Really Saying Something" from dulcinea
Thanks, I needed a laugh today and you provided several! The D scale is wonderful. I hope you continue with this story.
Comments from author:
Seems everyone loved the D Scale. Made sense to me. Thanks! I intend to :D
Review By [dulcinea] • Date [13 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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