Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from spring
Oh come on! You can'tjust stop at this point! I love this fic so far it is wonderful! I really really really hope that you are able to lupdate this fic again sometime again soon. Again I love this wonderful fic.
Review By [spring
] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Wolveschildscub
I love it write more, write more, write more cant wait to read
LOVE YA WOLFCHILD
Review By [Wolveschildscub
] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from GeekGoddess
Interesting story...I have been waiting for you to update. I find the storyline of Hermione being a Malfoy kind of cliche, but I find myself anxious to see what happens next in your story. Well written and excellent character development.Please update soon.
Review By [GeekGoddess
] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from cflat
This is good. Can't wait for more!
Review By [cflat
] • Date [18 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Lin
Woah, very well written. I am enjoying this immensly. For the first few chapters i was thinking, "man where is the crossover" then of course i noticed it was in the Noncrossover section adn i was enjoying th story so much that i didn;'t really care. :D Please update soon.
Review By [Lin
] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Jewel
Interesting. I don't often see HP stories where the Slytherin 'royalty' - including Pansy and Blaise - are, at the least, adverse to Voldemort. I may have missed it (since I'm reading at work in between other tasks), but are the Slytherin kids merely adverse, or are they actively anti-Voldemort?
Review By [Jewel
] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from purrfus
Just discovered and now tracking.
Intriguing setup. The glimpses into Slytherin House and Prince behaviors are really interestingly done.
Review By [purrfus
] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
Some good writing and story development here.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from YademosEbyam
Okay, you *could* go for Draco finding his sister magically, but there is a simpler way. If Lucius does in fact know where his daughter is, he could given Draco orders to protect Hermoine and establish a connection with her. An order that bizarre would certainly arouse Draco's suspicions, although he might believe his father just planned to use her (and he wouldn't be wrong). How Dumbldore and Snape might react to Draco's "change of attitude" could be interesting, particularly if only *one* of them came to the correct conclusion. And of course Ron would automatically assume the "ferret" was after his girl, and would no doubt say so at the worst possible moment in the worst possible way. ;)
Review By [YademosEbyam
] • Date [7 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from TheOtherWillow
Nice chapter, glad to see you continuing this. The blood to open the journal was a great touch. Can't wait for the next update!
Review By [TheOtherWillow
] • Date [6 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from katimarie
i like the twin thing, when will hermoine find out that she's a malfoy?
Review By [katimarie
] • Date [4 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from fanfictionfanatic
Intriguing idea for a story. I'm really enjoying it so far. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [fanfictionfanatic
] • Date [12 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from azulkan
Don't remember seeing Draco and Hermione as brother and sister in a story before. Really like that thought. Can't wait for more.
Review By [azulkan
] • Date [15 May 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Cutiepie
Huh. So you are setting up Hermione as Draco's twin? Unique thought. Kind of detracts from the theme that a "mudblood" can be just as good or even better than a pureblood, if the only central wholly muggle-born turns out to in fact be pureblood. I mean, Harry's not a pureblood from a long line of purebloods on both sides, but he is still the child of a wizard and a witch. Ron is pureblood as much as Draco, only his family is less influential and monitarily enhanced. Other than that problem I have with it, I like your story beginning quite a bit. I hope you continue to write it. =]
Review By [Cutiepie
] • Date [13 May 04] • Not Rated