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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from spk
Just found this story and am very interested to see where you take it. I really hope you will pick it back up. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [11 Jun 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from SnoChan
Love the fic so far, and you should really update soon. But, ya know, whenever's good for you. No pressure. Oh, and ever consider pairing Buffy up with Spike for this fic? Please?
You rarely ever see that in Harry Potter crossovers nowadays.
Review By [SnoChan] • Date [4 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from PomegranateQueen
Oh, hey, nifty fic... I like the plot... I hope there's more of it some time soon... very awesome...
Review By [PomegranateQueen] • Date [26 Sep 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from deadlysins
A brilliant start to an intriguing story. I like how Dawn won the argument! Yay Dawn! So, I'm guessing this is set in Season 6?
Review By [deadlysins] • Date [26 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from raven
Little change, huge improvement. The only hole left that I saw was who would look after the hellmouth, but if it's that slow you could easily get one of Angel's crew to look after it for a bit. And with all the wizarding travel doodads, someone could be there to help in minutes if needed. Excellent work!
Review By [raven] • Date [15 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from WhiteWolf
Dumbledore is really gone bunckers to hire Ethan Rayne. *grin*
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [15 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from raven
This chapter seems to leave a lot of loose strings to pull-for instance, Buffy objects to Giles introducing her, bringing up the secret identity but he only introduced her as Buffy. Was there a reference to the Slayer before she threw her fit-because otherwise she is complaining that he politely introduced her to an old friend. Also, the characters seem quite off towards the end of the chapter-Buffy is just blindly going to "kick his scaly ass" when she had no knowledge of him before? Granted, she may want to go with her Watcher, but what about the hellmouth? What about the no killing humans rule? And what about the prophesy that only Harry can handle that? Surely Arthur at least knows of the prophesy? Also, to have her blindly make decisions for everyone else in something like this is off-especially if you are basing this post "The Body" as implied by her making decisions for Dawn with no metion of Joyce. By that point she is beginning to rely more heavily on the others-not push them away. If I remember right, you set this story after "Flooded" so she has come back to life and is involved with Spike and pretending everything is ok while trying to get together the money angle-why is this chapter not reflecting that? ( I remember you changing the dates of this epi, and obviously Giles is still around, but there are many other loopholes that are only going to get bigger if you pull everyone away from the Hellmouth. Not saying you need to redo anything-just make an A/N of any differences-or just declare this completely AU. Either would help make sense of the holes.)
Review By [raven] • Date [14 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from musicgirl
I like it! While it may not be the most original plot, the whole spacey Harry thing is new. You write the characters excellently. When will the Scoobies come into it? Can't wait!
Comments from author:
*Blushes* Thank you!
The Scoobies are in the next chapter, which is basically done, but I'm just re-reading and checking for spelling and the like. I hope I write the characters from the Buffyverse as well as I apparently write the characters from the Potterverse... I've never written BtVS before. Pure HP, yes, but never BtVS, so I'm a bit nervous.
Yes, the plot-line is pretty unoriginal right now... Big plot twist will come eventually, though;) I can't wait to get to that part... It might not be comepletely original, but I haven't seen it before, so I hope you like it! Thanks so much for reviewing!:D
Review By [musicgirl] • Date [25 May 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Wormbait
Very nice, I am definately enjoying it so far. Nice to see Ginny in a relationship with someone other than Draco, sorry to all the fans of that but it's getting a bit overdone.
Ron and Buffy should get on well with the over-protective thing going.
As for pairings I've always thought Willow and Tonks would be the perfect pair, but whatever you choose I'm sure I'll enjoy it.
Looking forward to more.

Comments from author:
I'm so happy you like it:D And Ginny and Dean... I'm not sure if I'm going make them stay together, but they did get together at the end of book 5, so I'm following from there. I do love Ginny and Draco together (sorry!), but I don't think they'll be a pairing in my story.
Thanks for the suggestion of Willow and Tonks... I actually was considering it when I first got the idea for the story. Right now, Willow and Tara are still together, from where it is in the Buffyverse, but I'm not sure if I'm gonna keep them together either. Again, we'll see where it goes. I can think the story's going one way, but then it might comepletely change; sometimes these things write themselves.
Thanks so much for reviewing!:D
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [21 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from superbrutal
So they know what Buffy and Giles did but do they know of Willow and Xander helping out?
Comments from author:
They will know about Willow and Xander and everyone else helping out. Don't think I'm forgetting Wills and the Xand-man! I love them both! It's just that it seems, from the show, most people (who don't actually know Buffy) don't really think of the Slayer as having anyone at her side besides her Watcher, and most books that record what the slayer has done won't mention anyone but those two. But they will find out when everyone meets. Afterall, Xander was the key-guy when the fought the mayor:D Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [21 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Key Summers'" from ChineseRedwood
That was a really awesome start - I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you like it! I feel all happy and special now. :D
Review By [ChineseRedwood] • Date [18 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Key Summers'" from Akalea
Hmm...this is interesting :) I like the descriptions in this chapter...keep writing :D
Comments from author:
That's good. About the description thing. I was afraid at one point that there might not have been enough. Thanks! :D
Review By [Akalea] • Date [18 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Key Summers'" from WhiteWolf
Interesting beginning.
Comments from author:
Thanks! :D Now I know I can write interestingly (is that a word?)
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [17 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Key Summers'" from Jillian
Very, very, very, VERY good. I love it so far. I can't wait until everyone meets. I hope Harry gets happy soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm happy to see you like it so much. About Harry, though... We'll have to see how the story plays out (he will get happier eventually, though whether it will be sooner or later, I don't know). But thanks so much for your review! :D
Review By [Jillian] • Date [17 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Key Summers'" from superbrutal
I think its good, lets see some more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm writing more as I type this.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [17 May 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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