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Review of chapter "Drunken Fool" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Neat! :) I like it, especially this part:

A trio of large men stepped out, looking ready to pummel Jonothan into talking. They were large, with vicious smiles and dull eyes - minions, thought human ones.

"Now, here's where someone's going to have to step in. The odds just aren't fair anymore," Angel stepped out of the shadows. "Tell you what, just to make things a bit more sporting, why don't I offer Jonothan - that is your name, right? Why don't I offer Jono here a hand?"

"This doesn't concern you, Irish." Beard glared at Angel, while motioning towards his men.

"I insist," Angel smiled, trying not to let his fangs drop.

In the end, it wasn't a fair fight at all. Jonothan managed to hit one of the men before getting knocked down, while Angel dealt with the thugs easily. The bearded man fled, probably fearing police involvement. Angel took the opportunity to drink from one of them, not enough to kill, but a nice bite.

"Need a hand getting home?" He asked the fallen Englishman, hoping that he hadn't seen anything.

Jonothan lurched upwards, brushing at his wrinkled shirt. "Er, yes, I think that might be good. Thank you."

If he'd realized that he'd end up invited to stay at the ancestral home, he might not have asked. Especially not if he'd known that it would mean listening to stories of a horrible mummy, given vast power by a curse, and the way that Jonothan - with a bit of help from his sister and her husband - had been forced to stop the Mummy Imhotep. The vast hordes of gold that he'd seen - and lost - at each encounter.

Clearly, the Romany weren't as nasty with a curse as they thought. That thing with Imhotep and the eternity as a mummy... It sounded far worse than being a vampire with a soul.

Very awesome, and very cool as well.
Keep up your super-great, very neat and phenomenally brilliant writing! :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Drunken Fool" from Cutiepie
Oh, yeah, it sounds worse! Angel got lucky, even if he didn't really realize it. At least he has a chance to redeem himself a bit. Thank you for this fun little story. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [20 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Drunken Fool" from trinfaneb
Pretty cool--hadn't thought of a crossover with The Mummy yet.
Review By [trinfaneb] • Date [20 May 04] • Not Rated
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