Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Frogsareevil
i really enjoyed this story -- i went looking for alias x-overs after re-watching a few episodes. I found this story entertaining and exciting. However, i have to say i didn't like the fact that Willow was portrayed as almost powerless. Not only is she a powerful witch, but as Giles said to her, the magic is part of her now, meaning that she would certainly have the power to defend herself against the soldier boys, or at the very least Lilah - i mean she took down Buffy.
Also just a personal opinion, but i always liked Faith, i liked the fact that in S7 she got out of jail, because i don't think anyone should put all the blame on Faith for her previous actions. She was never accepted into the Scooby Gang, and when she killed the first guy accidentally, it was almost viewed as the justification for excluding her. The death was accidental, yet everyone viewed her as a cold blooded murderer. She never had anyone who cared about her, so when the Mayor took her in, is it any wonder he managed to manipulate her? She obviously wasn't a cold-blooded murderer as she was visibly shaken in one episode where the Mayor talked about killing Willow. Furthermore, Faith willingly tried to repent for her actions, yet no one in the Scooby Gang forgave her, despite the fact that they forgave Giles, Willow, Anya, Andrew, Angel, Spike, etc... Even in S8, Buffy automatically assumed Faith was evil, with only a few distorted facts to back her theory up. Faith was an innocent victim of circumstance and reactions. I am not trying to condone her actions only put them in perspective. So in other words i didn't like the comment about her getting off easy by the fact that she might be killed by a vamp.
But otherwise good story.
Review By [Frogsareevil
] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from banner
This was lots of fun! I enjoyed it from beginning to end - it was complex, unexpected, and fit very well with canon. The characterizations couldn't be better.
There was also a lot of truly nifty banter. "I thought I got all the crap assignments."
* chortle *
Review By [banner
] • Date [22 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from HannahBabies
I just wanted to let you know that I think this story is GREAT!! I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait to read the sequel! I also wanted to say you are really a good writer and keep up the good work! :)
Review By [HannahBabies
] • Date [17 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from WhiteWolf
100 million buck for Buffy! How much would she fetch now that their are a few more slayers around? *grin*
Review By [WhiteWolf
] • Date [3 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TroyGuffey
(Entire story)Pretty good writing.
The bit about Angel warning Sloane at the end was a mistake. SD-6 wasn't thinking about Buffy & Sunnydale anymore, but now they have cause.
You could also use quite a bit of proofreading.
Review By [TroyGuffey
] • Date [21 May 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroyGuffey
Very good idea, fairly well written.
However, getting shot in the head *should* *SERIOUSLY* mess up vampires. (For at least several hours, maybe days or weeks) And kneecapping work pretty darn well, too.
Review By [TroyGuffey
] • Date [21 May 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Cutiepie
Wow, I quite enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it. And longhand? Whew!! I quit that once I got my own PC. Well, at least for anything longer than a couple pages. =] I am impressed. You did quite a great job crossing the three worlds (unless you don't consider Angel and Buffy to be separate worlds, then just the two worlds were crossed well). I will be looking forward to your sequel with much anxiousness. Yay!
One minor question: What is the significance of the title? I don't get it.
Review By [Cutiepie
] • Date [21 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from raven
Hm...if you're going for italian, it should be La Bocca di Inferno, not Boca di Hell.
Overly large cemetary gave Syd the heebie jeebies? I would have thought it was the dozen plus overly large cemetaries...
Why'd she meet Vaughn at the pier? That was dead drops and secret liasons...mission briefs were in the warehouse of unrequited love or the bloodmobile-gotta love the bloodmobile-and in a Buffy XO? Irony! Free irony!
Anya's money conversation? Brilliant-especially Willow heckling in the background. Minor typo with "...do all the world for you..."-work for you? Several other similar typos-bit for big, bid for big, next for nest, etc. May want to do a quick run-though to catch them.
Why did Vaughn call Riley Agent Finn but Riley called him Mr.? They are both agents...only seems polite.
Xander has slightly curly hair? When did I miss that?
Riley upset that Buffy trusted Syd over him? Wonderfully real.
Liked the Keri Russell jokes-nice tie in.
Excellent homage to Indiana Jones-just missing the rolling ball and the spikes from the walls.
If Xander and Anya have broken up, shouldn't Anya be a demon again? And therefore rather difficult to tie up against her will?
Big Pink...hehe. How very Marshall.
Wasn't Gavin killed by the time Cordy returned? I though he got taken out just before Conner was sent to to the hell dimension? Although I always did love his simpering...
Meeting of the Zeppos...perfect.
Love the mulitple double crosses between, well, everyone. Very true to all 3 shows. Didn't like the Initiative setting up shop in Sunnydale-presents problems for the Glory arc as well as the end of Primevil with the government guys telling them to close up the operation permanently. Although, if Joss can ignore it in canon, I guess FF can too. Excellent story but please take a moment to correct the spelling, spacing, and spell check blips. Looking forward to the upcoming sequel.
PS-Do you take requests? Maybe possibly perhaps er-SpyDaddy? Pretty please?
Review By [raven
] • Date [20 May 04] • Not Rated