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LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams

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Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from Midnmax
Review:
Characterization - decent
Descriptions - decent

Plot - just like the movies. That's not a compliment.
A magical clue which is stolen by the enemy just after it is figured out. Going through a complicated series of traps to lose the artifact to the bad guy when it would have been perfectly safe where it had been if they had just stayed home. A pointless car chase. Repeatedly allowing the bad guy to escape when if Xander had had the balls to kill the criminals who had kidnapped and tortured him, then none of this would have been necessary.

Premise had promise - result ultimately very disappointing.
Review By [Midnmax] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from Omegaprime
Review:
You sir have created a good story. Xander and Lara are a good couple and together they work well. You have made Xander nto a badass which is good. Lara did something we all wanted to do, defend Xander and tell off Buffy.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nicely done. Feels like the proper genre.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from Kenshin
Review:
Great Story.
Review By [Kenshin] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from anabellatrix
Review:
Absolutely loved this story!! I know you wrote it a while ago now but wow its brilliant. Gotta love any stories that realise Xander's potential which, while he was always brilliant in canon, sometimes left you feeling his talents were wasted. Your story fixes this oversight and I thank you for this. Am now making my way through the rest of your stories which are all of epic length proportions so I'd better get on! Thanks for writing, you are very talented keep up the good work!!
Review By [anabellatrix] • Date [16 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from Elleria
Review:
Lovely lovely fic. :-) I enjoyed every bit of it. Looking forward to the sequel.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [9 Mar 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from LadyRowan
Review:
What a fantastic story! Xander as Lara Croft's ideal partner. Too cool.
Review By [LadyRowan] • Date [26 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "LXT01 - Grand Canyon Dreams" from Caliadragon
Review:
I loved this fic! I really enjoyed the way that you had Xander acting throughout the story and the interaction between Lara and Xander was lovely. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [22 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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