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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Rune
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Buffy with SGC is always fun. Mostly because the Buffy cast has no real problems accepting aliens while the SGC founders on magic and demons.

Thanks for a great fic.
Review By [Rune] • Date [28 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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This is an amazing story. Only thing wrong is how long it took for me to discover it. I think that sequel thing is a great idea... You might want to link this story to that story as a series so people realize there actually is a sequel.

Peace,

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from maxthehobbit
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The person you got to review and correct your mistakes did a good job. I noticed after about the fifth chapter the action got better and I wasn't bored then. I've only seen two episodes of SG-1, but I like it almost as much as BtVS ... gotta buy the DVDs soon. I enjoyed your writing style, easy to read and flows smoothly. Already started reading the sequel and am enjoying it.
Thanks for posting your stories, I find them very entertaining and enjoyable.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from maxthehobbit
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Looks good so far. It's holding my interest although it's a little slow. You should read your writing before you post it because there are a lot of mistakes that take away from the story a little. Most things I can figure out, but some ... I had no idea what you were trying to say. That may be because you're obviously British, I can tell by the writing, not much different from American English, but just enough to confuse me sometimes. Time to get back to reading.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
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Nice fic here. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [26 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from serenityselena
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interesting story ....
lots of twists .... great plot ....
^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dragonelf
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You have done an excellent job with this story.

::Starts reading the sequel::

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We are an impossibility in an impossible universe.
- Ray Bradbury
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [20 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MarcusSLazarus
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Interesting idea you’ve got here, I have to admit.

I wouldn’t have minded a BIT more thought in the beginning of Daniel and Willow’s relationship- there’s got to be at least a decade between them; even with Buffy and Angel as an ‘example’ for Willow you’d think that ONE of them would be a bit more awkward about the idea at first-, but the circumstances under which Daniel and Giles learned about each other’s respective secrets made sense, and your idea regarding how the Ancients became the Powers That Be AND ‘created’ magic on Earth was a particularly original twist.

A bit ambiguous about Giles’s ‘decision’ to take Willow away, of course- not wanting to risk her life is one thing, but if a prophecy states something surely it would be better to face it on their terms-, but it ended up in a VERY dramatic confrontation with Anubis- my personal favourite SG-1 villain, with RepliCarter a close second-, to say nothing of the cool-yet-terrifying idea of how Willow managed to beat him...

Oh, and an interesting touch with your explanation for how the Ancients are ‘responsible’ for magic, to say the least; in keeping with the themes of both series while neatly allowing them to fit together in one universe.

Keep up the great work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from pstibbons
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best lines:
Giles says it’s post-traumatic stress. Hah, I say, hah; there’s nothing ‘post’ about it.

I wrapped my arms tightly round his neck with a short squeal, hugging him in delight; so hard he’d know how much I’ve missed him. Drawing back, I stared him in the face, his expression was filled with a mixture of concern and amusement at my reaction.

Jack still limping slightly, Sam trying very hard to look as though she was not mother henning him and watching his every move

“It was either that or have Daniel quit the SGC, he’s been like a cat on a hot tin roof about seeing you!”

...

I thought it would end with Giles and Willow being offered jobs in the SGC.
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from pstibbons
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Willow shredded Anubis, destroying his soul utterly, ending all that he was. She felt his pain as his existence was torn from him; she was not just ending his life, but his spirit. His shrieks filled her ears, her brain, her soul, as she crushed him, piece by loathsome piece.

“She lived through hell, and came out the other side. She lost her friends and family, yet survived. She has new friends now that will be her family if she’ll let them, friends whose lives she has saved.”
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from pstibbons
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“I’m thinking either a lame take on the Nazgul or Emperor Palpatine, and my Goddess the décor is tacky…” Teal’c almost smirked, raising an eyebrow in amusement from across the room. Willow climbed nonchalantly up the steps, never looking away from Anubis as she made her way towards him.
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from pstibbons
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It felt wrong, leaving without Daniel. It was like she was leaving something very important behind. Like leaving the cooker on gas mark 9 and the front door unlocked, but magnified.
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from pstibbons
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“I’ve wiped myself from their data banks, and sent the operations team that was waiting for me on a round trip to Wyoming.”
“You’re kidding me,” gaped Jack. He was beginning to seriously revise his opinion of the redhead. “Carter, you’re a computer geek, why do you never do anything like that?” Sam glared back at him.
“Because, I want to keep my job,” she replied irritably.

(why do authors think hackers can work so quickly? It's insulting.)
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from pstibbons
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She had really hoped the hats were optional; if she looked anything like Teal’c did in his…

“There’s no magic here,” she replied. Daniel and Sam looked at her, puzzled. “On Earth, magic is part of every living thing – part of the Earth itself. Here, there’s nothing, it feels dead.”

He needed a large dose of caffeine before exchanging cryptic sayings with Oma Desala on a good day…
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from pstibbons
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“What if the translation’s wrong?” said Jack argumentatively.
“It’s right,” snapped Willow, Giles and Daniel in unison.
Jack raised his hands in defence as he retracted his comment, muttering something about an overabundance of geeks.

Another galaxy, far, far away… She wished fervently that she could share this with Xander.
Review By [pstibbons] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
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