re-reading the series out of boredom. while the spelling errors and flaws are more glaring to me now than when i read the series years ago, i've still enjoyed re-reading them. even though you've tended to give the short end of the stick to the characters from DS9, my favorite Star Trek show. i really wish you'd decided to try another rewrite of this story rather than abandon it altogether.
just out of curiosity, did anyone ever take you up on your offer of writing in the prometheus verse? and if so, do you happen to have any links to the stories?
another thought that just occurred to me was that so far you've largely ignored the consequences of the demonic incursion when it comes to the Delta and Gamma Quadrants.
Review By [KingDarius] • Date [17 Jan 13] • Not Rated
lol, the ending was sort of funny with the "you two need some privacy." line. I liked that he's practically with Jo and warmed up to Seven already.
I do Not like that you reset the universe to square 1, but that is the only conceivable way that I can come up with to saving it. I was wondering how you were going to save everything when you had the hellmouth open up on earth and go haywire.
Review By [KingHawke] • Date [13 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Wow! Love this story. Interesting love triangle with Seven not even realizing she's in it. It will be interesting to see if getting to Xander (even on a platonic level) prompts Seven to want ot experience human emotions sooner than in the original timeline. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [11 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This may seem like an odd question, but if Q was sentenced to be his companion for 300 years, and they have been "trapped" in the pod 375 years, doesn't that mean he is sprung? When does the countdown begin? While it would skew the plot from where it appears you want to take it, you could easily argue that even though both Q and Xander have memories from before the "reset" that both have served the 300 years already.
I love this universe and I really look forward to seeing where this will go. I would put my hand in, but I am a slash writer and I don't think you'd like seeing Xander with one of the guys instead of one of the girls. Thanks and more soon I hope.
Calia
Comments from author:
No, BUT, there are no gay or lesbian character's in the verse, so if you've got any ideas? Let me know
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [2 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Glad to see you taking up this series again. I thought you ended it in tragedy in the last installment. --- BTW, what are the Broli? I am forgtting the episodes they were on.
Comments from author:
The Briori are abuducter alien's, feat. in the 39'ers VOY.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [29 May 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
