Oh this is wonderful. I really really love Anya's last remark.

This was adorable. Your Buffy dialogue was genius! Her 'wig-o-meter' that cracked me up. Thanks so much for sharing!

lovely and well written story. i very much enjoyed reading (and re-reading) this fic.
perhaps a (much longer) sequel? pretty please with all the hotties on top!?
;-)

i hope there's a sequel, this story is great

LOL! Love the way Legolas is sooo protective in this fic. Anya is hilarious as always.

"That was very tricky, Elf, climbing out the window like that." Anya narrowed her eyes at Legolas and Buffy. "Did you sneak out to see her?" At his sheepish look, she gasped and turned to Buffy, who groaned. "Is he your new org–"

Had me rotflmao. Would love to see a sequel and have Willow screw up with the spell again and instead of just sending Legolas home Buffy goes with him. Waddya think?

This is really good. I like how you skipped the expository chapters, leaving it all for the reader to put together. Okay, well there was some exposition, but still, I liked how it started with something that had already happened, as opposed to having a chapter or two spent on pre-Legolas time.

I would like to read more, though.

Very nice, especially your way of writing.The players are well in charater and especially their manner of speach. Anya was really well done and it was so funny when Dawn and Willow just looked at each other and then dragged the ex-demon into the kitchen.

Please please please write some more chapters for this story. Maybe some background of how Legolas came into Buffy's world or how they'll proceed in the coming month or maybe how the two characters are after Legolas is back in his own world....But don't let the story end here, there's way too many potential in this story and as far as I can tell with this one chapter you really have good writing skills.

Nice idea bring legolas to Buffy and not the other way round!

Hope you write more with this pairing, there isn't nearly enough

Shelli