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Inheritance: A Halloween Story

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Review of chapter "Inheritance: A Halloween Story" from DieselDriver
Review:
Good grief. "Fallow" is what a field is when you don't plant a crop, "follow" is what you do when you walk behind someone going to the same destination. "Where" is a location, "wear" is what you do with cloths or a costume.
Comments from author:
If that's all you found for a story I wrote almost ten years ago, when I was just getting into the habit of writing for fun, then I think it turned out well.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Part" from starwolf
Review:
A new an unique twist on a much used theme. I very much enjoyed this. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [18 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Part" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Fabulous story. Can't wait to read the rest of the series.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Part" from kaekae
Review:
last line was great. :)
Review By [kaekae] • Date [20 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Part" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Part" from spring
Review:
wonderful.
Review By [spring] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Part" from Morgomir
Review:
Love it, read it, reviewing it. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Part" from Obsidian
Review:
I have one thing to say "NICE!"
and I am on to read the next story right..... NOW!
THANKS
Comments from author:
Glad you like the idea for the series. Hopefully the later stories flow a bit better than this one.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Part" from GundumM
Review:
absolutely loved it
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it
Review By [GundumM] • Date [18 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Part" from schulyr
Review:
so incredibly awesome I can't wait to read the next story in the series
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy the others in the series just as much.
Review By [schulyr] • Date [19 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Part" from JEHayes
Review:
What an interesting take on the superman costume idea. I especially like how superheroes are just relics of the past. It gives the story a certain atmosphere that reminds me a bit of The Watchmen. The writing was pretty good, and I especially loved your Willow when they were all meeting in their costumes before going out. She was spot on and incredibly funny. I also like your Xander. You write him well, even if we didn't see much of him in this story. After all, Clark came out to play pretty quick. I'm looking forward to reading the next story in the series to find out why he suddenly switched from no powers to powers just with a few memories.
Comments from author:
It was an early work so one of the things I still like about it was how I did Willow in the scene as well.

You are the first one that said the story reminded them of Watchmen. I think it works though, maybe that was somewhere in the back of my mind when I wrote this story.

As to why Xander when from no powers to powers, well he just needed a little boost, and the spell gave it to him.
Review By [JEHayes] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Final Part" from purrfus
Review:
Lots of fun to read. I seen Xander as Superman, but this is the first with the JSA - nice twist. Cordy as Bast, and Willow as a Banshee, and the way Ripper Giles were great.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I tried to be creative with the costumes here and it's always nice when someone says it payed off.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Part" from Elleria
Review:
Oh wow! I love this!
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Final Part" from Caliadragon
Review:
This was a brilliant fic! I sincerely hope that you decide to do a sequel to this.

Thank you

Calia
Comments from author:
This is the first in a series. In the next story we will get to meet the other members of the JSA and their decendents.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [12 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "part 8" from Caliadragon
Review:
Wow! This is such an incredible fic and I look forward to seeing what will happen next. Thanks and more soon I hope.


Calia
Comments from author:
Stories are comming slower now because of school so it may be a while.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [6 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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