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Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from Keshkreature
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story, and it's refreshing to see Hogwarts from a less-usual perspective. The company Willow's keep are quite entertaining. One thing you might want to look at though: "Rupert nodded, making a mental not to find out that woman’s name." Seems like the not didn't go there. Really looking forward to more, thanks!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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I usually try to read only finished fics, but the idea of a friendship (or more) between Willow and Narcissa was too good to pass up.

I have enjoyed what I've read so far and am looking forward to more.

Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [31 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from draconis
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Very nice story, well written. Love the intrigues. I am going to hate waiting for the updates to this story.

I didn't think much about it until Harry mentioned observing it, but I think Snape would see it as a liability that needs handling...he'd likely suggest to Willow that she put a decoy wand in the cup on her desk.

I'm kind of surprised Kiarran didn't see Willow's purchase of two OOTs as a very serious potential threat...unless he's already got a soul. I definitely see him as the type that wouldn't be too different even with a soul.
Review By [draconis] • Date [20 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from deathgeonous
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Ah, yes it's sad that Harry needs to be so paranoid, especially in this case, when it's not really needed. That said, great fic, I'm truly enjoying it, so thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [19 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from LeaFairy
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Great update! I am so happy to see a new chapter to this amazing story! Yay!

I loved the part between Harry and Hermione, it's nice seeing a bit about them for a change. I totally LOL at how paranoid Harry is. He *does* have a point though :) I also enjoyed the part with Giles as well. I wonder if he and his Watchers-in-training will find any info/dirt on the Crabbe and Goyle families? I'm also curious if Hermione and Harry will find anything about Willow?

Anyways, thanks for the update! I look forward to hopefully, reading more in the future!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from borgrabbit
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Cheer-ku:

Fantastic story
Just passing chapter nineteen
Muse be kind to thee
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Don't become a stranger, be an update ranger‼‼☺
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from MistressRed
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Yeah! Thank you for the update! I hope your muse gets tired of hide-and-seek and we get more sooner!
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
yay for an update!
and lol at Harry ;) haha, he's got a pt!
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seeking Answers" from Wormbait
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Awesome. Both the story itself and the fact that there's more of it.

Hmm, wonder if the Wizards and the Watchers will meet in the middle of their investigations or go off on different tangents.

Well done and thanks for sharing, I look forward to more.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [15 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movement on the Edges" from MistressRed
Review:
I still love this story. Any chance you will come back to it some time soon?
Comments from author:
A) I'm delighted that you love the story.

B) I do want to come back to it, but every time I try to work on it, I can't get farther than a very sketchy outline of what I want to have happening. The story isn't cooperating *sad sigh* so I will be waiting a bit longer to update it. Some of the characters involved are a bit tricky to write correctly (in a way that is true to themselves and compatible with my plotlines), and pacing is always a concern.

While 'soon' would be nice, I can't make any promises about when this one will be updated.


Lucinda
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movement on the Edges" from LeaFairy
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Really great story so far! I love the Willow/Severus friendship and possible more-ship. lol. I also love the parts with Narcissa and her vampire 'uncle'. Your characterization of her is wonderfully done and I do hope her and Willow form a friendship... After they get rid of Lucius of course. *grins*

As for Willow's threatening of Lucius, it was absolutely perfect :) I wonder if he was the one behind the attacked on her? Maybe?

I also really do adore Draco in this as well. He's grown so much already with just Willow's acceptance of him... I love how much it means to him that Willow sees him as 'just Draco'. Aww.

Anyways, I look forward to hopefully, reading more! Thanks for writing!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movement on the Edges" from mimijikazananyi
Review:
This is really quite well-written. I hope inspiration strikes soon! I can't wait for another update :)
Review By [mimijikazananyi] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movement on the Edges" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
Nice addition. I like the overall progression and character development.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movement on the Edges" from (Current Donor)kcl
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Thank you for updating this wonderful story. I'm always delighted when I see that you've added to it and, as usual, the writing was both superb yet frustrating at the foreshadowing. ;) Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)kcl] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Movement on the Edges" from Dragonelf
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You have done a good job with this chapter.

::Gives the plot bunny some Cabbage roll::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Jun 10] • Not Rated
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