Interesting series idea. I've read a few of the books (until I got bored with LKH's apparent fascination with writing soft porn) and rather liked the general idea and background to the Sidhe courts. I very much like the way you've used Cordy in this cross and would love to see what happens when she decides to 'fix' the relationships around her.
I hope you decide to update the series some time.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lifting the Veil II" from Laney
Review:
Very nice, I liked all of the manips but this one is my favourite... and the first one.
There's only one tiny thing that I'd suggest changing (not that I have any idea how to do a photo-manipulation at all....) : The green hair has a higher intensity than the rest of him, so it doesn't quite look like it belongs with the rest of him. Not so much the hue, but... it stands out too much. If you could tone it down a little so that it doesn't seem to belong on a seperate animation cell - I'm comparing the old 'how did Disney do it' things with the background and the bright character's painted on a seperate cell that's just dropped over.