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Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from TrevaRea
Review:
Please continue this. There's so little Buffy/Daniel fics and they really do fit together so well.

Treva
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from lateVMlover
Review:
It's really awful of you to abandon such a great story! I hope you continue and FINISH some day!
Review By [lateVMlover] • Date [10 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from locard
Review:
This really is a great story and this is the second time I have read it, and there is only a couple other stories I have ever done that to. I hope you pick this story back up, I know life gets in the way a lot but it would be a shame not to finish it.
Review By [locard] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Glumski
Review:
No! This can't be unfinished! It just can't!
Oh, wow. It's been quite the time since I've read a BtVS/SG1 fanfic of this caliber. The characters are absolutely wonderfully done, even though Buffy isn't exactly the Buffy we know from the series (though she's starting to ber her again, just as you obviously planned so masterfully). The inter-personal relations are also amazing though I missed Dawn a little. I can't really imagine Buffy having barely any contact with her sister even if she's estranged from the Scoobies.
Apart from that... well, this is glorious. And you stopped right after the major build up when The Big Crossover would have happened. And this damn scary apocalypse isn't averted either. So please, please come back to this. This is just... so awesome.
Review By [Glumski] • Date [14 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from ShyBob
Review:
Never liked any other BS/DJ fics as I didn't see a real, reasonable connection. This is great, with actual plausible 'ship-building. And horrible impending apocalypse :) I really like what you've done with the more mature Buffy. She's got added depth, with believable character development and relationship problems. Who's she going to bump into first in Colorado, Daniel or Sam? I can't wait to see how skeptical Jack's going to be!
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [19 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from TrevaRea
Review:
I know it's been a long time since you worked on this, but is there any chance you'll finish it or have finished it but not posted any new chapters?

I can be contacted at ettajo@gmail.com.

Treva Rea
Review By [TrevaRea] • Date [14 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Berserkerzeroone
Review:
Really good story so far, I hope that you can return to writing it and finishing it. Maybe she should dream of the night she met Daniel but have a model of the stargate on a bookshelf or a picture on the wall or something.
Review By [Berserkerzeroone] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from brokenmimir
Review:
This is a great fic, but I guess its too much to hope for it to be finished (5 years is a goodly hiatus). Still, even though it ends just as it was reaching its core plot, I still love it. Very good work.
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from SilverWave
Review:
Great story just came across it via a recommendation :-)

Update?

LOL
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from nicjphill
Review:
Is it too late to ask for more of this story? Loving it so far and would love to see it completed!!!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from efwrocks
Review:
Great story! I hope that you can update the story soon!
Review By [efwrocks] • Date [23 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Phoenix and Fire" from Wrytergrrrl
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I love this story. The relationship building between Buffy and Daniel is so beautiful and so sad at the same time. I really hope that you come back and finish this fic in the future.
Review By [Wrytergrrrl] • Date [17 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from lucyferr
Review:
Great story :-) The second time I have read it... still good!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from lucyferr
Review:
These days her little sister was giving Giles a run for his money in finding and learning ever more obscure languages and bizarre ancient dialects. She had even taken to swearing in lesser T’orkorian, one of the weirder demon languages because she enjoyed the way it made her sound, like a cat trying to cough up a giant hairball.

lol

Together was a concept that she had lost faith in, a long time ago.

ow
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from lucyferr
Review:
Eventually she pushed back and locked eyes with him, hands fisted in his lapels, giving him a little shake with each word, as though her sentences needed punctuation.
“Dammit Daniel! You’ll not do this to me. I need you to stay with us. For me. For us. I can’t lose you too. Not again.”

I liked this, esp the phrase 'giving him a little shake with each word, as though her sentences needed punctuation.'

I did think the 'whole nine yards' paragraph was way too long.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [6 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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