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Review of chapter "Baby?" from Harry
Review:
Been a very interesting story so far. I know that both Willow and Draco are reluctant to admit to one another that they have been involved with the other. But Buffy was right to tell Harry that you do NOT want to see Willow at her baddest! That would be a death sentence for just about anyone!
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
Though there were some things I didn't like -- Ron's childishness, Willow or Draco not using protection, the concept of very young slayers -- I did enjoy reading this story and, despite what I said, I liked Samantha as a character.

I do think the story could benefit from another pass with the proofreading brush, and maybe a unified POV style.
Comments from author:
It is my story, but it's actually my least favorite, LOL. I wrote it when i was about fifteen, it wasmy first fanfiction at the time i thought i was doing such a great jb, rereading it at my current state of life and i agree with you 100 percent. i just don't remove it because i like to see where i started,thanks for the feedback and for reading :D

Also the last season of Buffy when all the slayers were activated, joss whedon introduced us to child slayers, it was not my concept.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hogwarts Express" from AstridWinchester
Review:
You changed Ginny's name? Molly calls her Ginevra somewhere in the series.

Otherwise, it's good, very in character
Comments from author:
i think when i wrote this i didn't know her name, but i have since changed it upon your review lol
Review By [AstridWinchester] • Date [31 Jul 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Rune
Review:
You did not kill enough death eaters. Willow is like the sorceress supreme when she wants to be. The magic of the wanded idiots is weak. A good wand to use against a death eater would be a Colt. Magic from wands is slow and can be dodged, bullets are fast and very hard to dodge. Willow should have flattened all the dark marked idiots. ALL OF THEM.

Otherwise its a good story.
Comments from author:
this was my first story ever written lol, im sure there are flaws i myself started reading it and stopped because i didnt like how i did it, thanks for reading!
Review By [Rune] • Date [25 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from pezgirl
Review:
Read this a few years ago, no idea why i never reviewed.
anyway, i loved reading this story; it was one of the first fics i read.

thanks for sharing the story, it was brilliant (:
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Ansku
Review:
Cute, but needs some serious formating before it can really be enjoyable.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [4 Dec 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from WriteTheGoodWrite
Review:
Where is Xander in all this? Huh? HUH???

...and there should've been a comment about Tara Malfoy's middle name in contrast to Willow's born religion (Not everyone worships Santa!).

Other than that, I loved this story. I read about halfway through yesterday until I thought I was gonna fall over, I was so tired - and I picked it up again today. SO. GOOD.

Post more stories!!!

Ta!
~The Cardboard Moon
Comments from author:
i have more stories silly, lol. im glad u liked i love that u liked it thank u for taking the time to review
Review By [WriteTheGoodWrite] • Date [11 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from collectivetears
Review:
this is pretty good...
Review By [collectivetears] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chance" from ladyshiva
Review:
I loved this chapter, it's a great lead in to the rest of the story, which I'm looking forward to reading much much more of. Kudos.

bex
Review By [ladyshiva] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chance" from elvi
Review:
I really liked this fic.
^_^

great job on it.

My only suggestion [not just on this fic] is to add spaces between your lines...Otherwise they run together and get hard to read.

But other than that, I loved it!
Review By [elvi] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)kribby
Review:
Good work on this! Your story was quite good!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [8 Jun 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from dixid
Review:
Great story, but I think you made a typo regard Sammy's bed.

A canapé bed would be one made of an appetizer consisting of fried or toasted bread or crisp crackers topped with seasoned spread of fish, meat, cheese or salad combinations.

Canopy bed, maybe? I had to giggle.
Review By [dixid] • Date [8 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Dreamer" from Ezmerelda
Review:
Very sweet ending for that last chapter! Or was it the end of the story?

In any case, Draco, Samantha, Willow and Tara make a loverly family. Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [29 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Dreamer" from Jess2
Review:
Please tell me you're not done yet. I want more chapters! Pretty please? This is a great story. I have to say though, I highly doubt Draco would ever grow a beard. Scruff maybe if he was really distraught, but not a full on beard. I want more!
Review By [Jess2] • Date [28 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Battle" from TarnishedGold
Review:
ROFL - Although I see your sentiment .... A Jewish/Wiccan naming their child CHISTian??
Comments from author:
it's not Christain is Christan, adn Willow's not ur traditional jew
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [24 May 05] • Not Rated
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