Review of chapter "Spike AKA The Torpedo" from
forlornfelineReview:
That's really cool.
Review By [
forlornfeline] • Date [6 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spike AKA The Torpedo" from
CallmemasterKentReview:
Spike the Torpedo...it was perfect...the other two chapters were awesome too...and Oz how about a reporter?
Review By [
CallmemasterKent] • Date [23 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spike AKA The Torpedo" from
trinfanebReview:
Maybe you could do something with the St. Valentine's Day Massacure, Al Capone, Franki Nitti, or Elliot Ness and the Untouchables or even Road to Perdition. Angel was actually shown being a bouncer outside a Chicago club during the 20's or 30's during one episode of AtS. You're doing a pretty good job with the period slang. Keep at it.
Comments from author:
That would be a good idea and I want to fit Angel in somewhere but I'm running out of characters for 'Chicago'. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [
trinfaneb] • Date [13 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy AKA The Flapper" from
CutiepieReview:
OK, I'm sort of confused. You said in your disclaimer that the Scoobies went back in time 20 years? That would be . . . 1984? Kind of creepy George Orwell story, but not the setting for Chicago. =] You need to fix that so it says the '20s, not just 20 years.
Now that I'm done being silly/nitpicky, these shorties are rather fun to read. They don't give much more than a feeling of place or time, and not a storyline like I prefer, but what do I expect from a short short story? Keep with it!
Comments from author:
Oh my, I didn't even notice that mistake until now. Thanks a bunch. =D.
Otherwise I really didn't want to have a storyline. I'm writing a larger fic which features Tara, Xander and Dawn. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [
Cutiepie] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Not Rated
