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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from lucyferr
Review:
I see you were experimenting with storywriting methods - that's cool, that's one use of writing fanfiction, to see what works as a writer and what doesn't.

I hope you learned that flashbacks don't work :-) Especially multiple ones.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from spring
Review:
I love this fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MusicalKiller
Review:
I LOVED your two stories, but I'm a stickler for B/A... out of curiousity, why didn't you have them see each other?
-Music
Comments from author:
Now you're challenging me.... I just had go and re read the story.

Alot of Finding Home is about mourning and closure. I think Buffy mourned Angel in that first few months in LA and in the show it was only when he came back that she was thrown into a tail spin.

By the end of the story Buffy had moved on and I don't doubt she still loved him but seeing him would push her back to 17. I guess you could say she had grown up and she didn't need to see Angel to get the closure, for her he had died back in Sunnydale and it was enough for her to know that he is alive.

Does that make sense?
Review By [MusicalKiller] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from spk
Review:
Beautiful job with all of the emotions involved. I like that you didn't have Buffy stay in Sunnydale...she's changed and it's time for her to really start living. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [20 Jan 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding Home" from DNelson
Review:
Where is "Dead to runaway"? I would like to read it first, but haven't been able to find it.
Review By [DNelson] • Date [28 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from canadiangodess
Review:
Love it!!
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [23 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from aussiemel
Review:
Love it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from freespoons
Review:
just finished reading this and Dead to Runaway and loved 'em both. nice job with both stories. esp. since Finding Home is a completly dif. type of fic. bravo i say!


and, you get bonus points for using 'Nap-town, MD. best small city in the world ;)
Review By [freespoons] • Date [30 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from SecondSilk
Review:
Great story. I loved both. The time and effort you put into them really paid off. It worked wonderfully well capturing what had happened and the effects on Buffy without going through everything.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [16 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Cutiepie
Review:
Yet another thought-provoking chapter. I appreciate it! I am just enjoying the story, even though you have said it is kind of hard for you to write because of all the rules you have created by making it so AU. So, applause to you for continuing to write it. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [12 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Cutiepie
Review:
It just keeps getting deeper and deeper. So, you didn't think you would go this far with the story? I, for one, am glad that you did. I like the way you write all the characters, and the way you are allowing the story to unfold. 'Course, I wonder what things are different or have happened differently in this new universe. For instance, did Faith ever kill a human in this one? Did she and Xander have their "up with people" moment? Was Riley around? Did Faith graduate from HS, and go on to college, and where does she live? What about Willow, Oz, and Tara? You may have answered some of these before, but I want to finish this review before I go searching for said answers. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [10 Jul 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SecondSilk
Review:
That was a good letter, and a good chapter. I liked Faith in Cleveland, and her sympathy.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [25 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Cutiepie
Review:
The reunion is so heart-rending. It's so hard, but I know it will be so worth it when they are done. I just hope that everyone will be able to forgive and grow past their past. Thank you (as always) for the chapter and all the work you are putting into this story. I appreciate it. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [24 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spacey
Review:
well this wasn;t what i expected, but then, i am not really sure what would have been ~_^
Review By [spacey] • Date [16 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SecondSilk
Review:
I like what you've done with Faith. As far as strongest, most reliable fighters go, I don't think it is either Buffy here or Faith, so, no Dawn, oh well. If you're willing and able I'd like to Tara and Anya, as canon. But maybe no more than a vague mention, if it's too much for Buffy to get her around so many changes so soon. I'd be more interested in her reestablishing her friendship with Willow and Xander, than dealing with their lives.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [15 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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