It worked, though these stories always make me a little sad for all the time that passes between the parents. Nicely done.

Quite a lot of fun to read. It was, IMO, well-written that Dawn and Charlie didn't immediately get together. Veronica's act of leaving Charlie early, while painting her in a more positive light, did seem a bit too simple, as it cleared the main tension without any effort.

Overall, though, nice story.

Thank you very much for the feedback. I'll agree, it was a scapegoat of massive proportions but at the time, I couldn't see any other way. I was rather short-sighted. I'm glad you took the time to read it and enjoyed it =]

You know, I'm glad I found this again. I was wondering how it ended just a few days ago.

I'm absolutely loving this story. Can't wait to see what will happen now that the twins have maneuvered both their parents to the Burrow! :)

I did so love this story. I just found it today, and seriously, this challenge has been one of my favourites, just because I love this concept. Tash and Sanna are lovely, and I love the banter between the friends (all of them), and especially how you portrayed the relationship between the girls and their parents. I can't wait to find out what happens next!

OMG OMG OMG!!!!! I can't believe it! They are finally together, well kinda sorta together! How long till the next chapter cause you just made my day~~~!!!!

ooooooooooh that was so exciting...please update asap i need to know what happens next x

Excellent chapter. Keep them coming.

This has been a lot of fun to read. I like your original characters a lot. Thanks for putting this together! Can't wait for more!

First Happy Birthday!

I've really been enjoying this fic and am looking forward to reading more. I think Sanna should let Mick in on the secret. Angel and Connor already know.

Anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I hope you had a great birthday.

Happy Birthday for yesterday! This story is fun, so please continue so we can see where they all end up! Don't think I've come across a Dawn and Charlie fic before and its good to see new pairings.
I'm keeping my fingers crossed that you'll finish this as just about all the other Parent Trap stories seem to be abandoned and I've always been a fan of the stories since reading Kastner's, Lottie & Lisa (the original Parent Trap) when I was a kid.

I generally don't read fics where OCs are the main focus of the story, but I was bored and decided to give this story a go. I'm really glad I ignored my rule as this story is fantastic! I am impressed at how although the twins personalities are similar you have made them different enough to be distinguishable from each other. The only part I didn't like was Ginny/Draco and Harry/Pansy (I hate Slytherins ^_^).

Looking forward to more

I'm very glad you ignored your rule too, and that you're enjoying the story as well. Also, you don't have to worry about the Slytherins all that much. They're mostly there in name only. Thank you for reviewing =]

great chapter, so glad your updating so frequently. cant wait for the next update. oh and happy birthday!!!!!! x

Thank you =] I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.

""Teddy, I just spent the last two hours playing Ring a Ring O' Roses on crack with gnomes. I can use whoever's name in vain that I want to.""

Loved that line! In jut read this story like 1 week ago so I'm really glad you updated. Bit creepy with the Angel part, and FINALLY someone is getting angry. I also don't get why they can't just Tell Mac, but her crush is so adorable.

Can't wait till everybody finds out, I hope for a big reveal with shouting and blame! Update whenever, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Thanks =]

I'm really looking forward to that part too! Confrontations are so much fun to write. I'm looking to update around Christmas, so hopefully it won't take me too long to write this next part.

Shallow, obviously not that smart, AND she "doesn't deal well with kids"... nope, really don't like the bitch.