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Review of chapter "Retrieval" from MLove
Review:
I would love to read the conclusion of this story. Is it posted anywhere?
Review By [MLove] • Date [9 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from apollo
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You said there was only one more chapter when you last posted, five years ago (although I'd love to see even more). Will it ever be posted - will this be continued, completed, or abandoned?

BTW, I also liked "A Date with Death" - way too few Dead Like Me crossovers.
Review By [apollo] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from jessie
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Interesting so far. Is there more? I hope so!
Review By [jessie] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from shadowMD
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Loved the story. Are you going to conrtinue?
Review By [shadowMD] • Date [10 May 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from skychan
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I'm afraid that so far I'm going to have to rate this somewhat low. It has a good deal of promise but I felt the four year jump was both a little fast, and that you haven't done quite enough characterization with some of the principle characters involved. I am looking forward however to the next few chapters.
Review By [skychan] • Date [16 Feb 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from Duchess
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Oooh, Jack is not happy with that exit, is he? I LOVE the little Slayer detector/Portkey ala Harry Potter that Willow gave Dawn. *giggling my head off* Xander is gonna pay for that verbal barb to Jack later, won't he? *still chuckling*

Poor General Hammond! This will NOT look good for him, will it? Maybe Willow could help him out in this regard if Kinsey or the NID try to use this against our favorite general? *crossing fingers*

How long will it take Cassie, after the magically swept away group meets up with everyone else, to tell Buffy she's been sleeping with the enemy? Will Buffy be typically stupid about it or, unlike in canon, see reason right away and believe her? Please write Buffy as smarter than she was in canon?!? *hoping hoping hoping* I'm REALLY hoping Cassie and company get back before "Harry" finds Buffy!

This is fantastic! I love it so far and applaud you for taking the time to mesh the two worlds together the way you have. Excellent work! *two thumbs up*

Oh and in response to one of your author's notes, there IS a fic out there with Methos as "The Immortal" and it's by tvnerdgirl on Fanfiction.net as a series that starts with Running on Empty. I don't think you absolutely have to read that one first, but it IS helpful. The one she's working on now, dealing with Methos being "The Immortal" is called "After the World Shatters" in case you're interested in reading it. :)
Review By [Duchess] • Date [21 Jul 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from judge
Review:
This story could go so many places.... good going so far. I like your writing style.. To the point, snide remarks for both Jack and Dawn... Not much so far from the queen of snide Faith.
Review By [judge] • Date [24 Dec 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Good story. But I'm not sure that Buffy would know the formula for the Cruciamentum drug.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [3 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from unicornzvi
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Nice story I hope you update soon.
Now while I suppose Cassandra could recognize the term 'Slayer' and that she was one from her dreams how exactly did
Dawn and Xander suddenly know that Buffy's boyfriend is a Go'uld?
Further more how did Xander and Dawn penetrate SGC almost to the gate room? If there had been a Slayer or a competant
magic user it would be belivable but since you didn't mention Dawn using magic in the story it isn't belivable.

The Unicorn
Comments from author:
Well, to answer your questions, Dawn and Xander don't know that it's Buffy's BF that is the Goa'uld - they have their suspicions about him in general, but haven't connected the dots between the prophecy that Willow relayed to them and Buffy's mysterious beau. More about him and the charm he uses to keep Buffy and Dawn 'off-guard' when he's in their vicinity will be in the next chapter. As for Dawn and Xander almost getting to the gate room; heck, the scoobies did manage to break into the Initiative. I figured the SGC wouldn't be much of a challenge ;). Or at least, for the sake of brevity, I decided not to make it one. After all, this is supposed to be a --short-- story (total 6 chapters) for the mid year ficathon thing, which I'm already past deadline for; therefore I cut out the 'break in' scene, and instead jumped straight to the confrontation with SG1 in order to advance the plot. :)
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is a very interesting fic and I look forward to seeing how Jack and the others deal with Cassie's disappearance and with the Scoobies. Thanks and more soon I hope.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Retrieval" from (Past Donor)JoeHundredaire
Review:
Not bad; just one issue. While using three periods in a row is an acceptable part of English (the particular name escapes me at present), using three question marks is not. Other than that, good story. Rock on.
Review By [(Past Donor)JoeHundredaire] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Har-mau" from VillageOrchid
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Continues to be exciting and fun!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Har-mau" from Caliadragon
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Very good! I love the fact that both Xander and Dawn have grown up, even if no one else has. Thanks and I look forward to them killing Har-mau.

Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [25 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strength" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very cool concept and good storytelling continue! Yeah!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Responsibilities" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like your scoobie concept, as well as that "the immortal" doesn't ping on Buffy's slayer sense.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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