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Review of chapter "Wishing for Someone Else" from Christy
Review:
whoa...interesting take...is there more?
Review By [Christy] • Date [30 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wishing for Someone Else" from banner
Review:
Very well done - an excellent story, intense and gripping.
Review By [banner] • Date [10 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wishing for Someone Else" from Goddessa
Review:
I really like this! I hope you continue. It has a lot of drama and plenty of angst stuff. How are you gonna clear Faith though?
Review By [Goddessa] • Date [1 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wishing for Someone Else" from PaBurke
Review:
It's gotten so that I watch every new CSI episode with this fic in mind. How sad is that?

Just in case you were wondering . . . The show has not disproved your plot line yet. It seems like it could be possible that Grissom has a daughter out there. I would be very interested in seeing this story continue, even in 100 word sound bites.

But thank you for sharing this much with us.
PaBurke
Review By [PaBurke] • Date [25 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lie" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
Review:
Loved it
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [21 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wishing for Someone Else" from Cutiepie
Review:
Still loving these, and yet still waiting for my 'happy ending.' I just want to know more, more, more. It's amazing how much you can give us with just a drabble. So, please don't stop writing on this plot line, but feel free to branch off into longer chapters if your muse will cooperate. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wishing for Someone Else" from raven
Review:
#6 seems like a bit of a drawback to previous chapters-didn't we already establish when Nick brought Grissom the prints that she was there? It makes sense that they would have to contact her regardless with the appointment/timeline. But was the print in #6 a backtrack or did they find it on the murder weapon or something? Seems like it was simply in the office-which is expected if Faith kept her appointment but I wasn't entirely sure.
Review By [raven] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lie" from (Past Donor)Mhalachai
Review:
Wow, that last line sent shivers up my spine. Excellent drabble.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mhalachai] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wishing for Someone Else" from tals
Review:
Wow! This is just wonderful! You are able to tell such a large, emotional story, in a drabble format. You've just created this entire world, with real, deep characters from only a few chapters. This is just a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Tals
Comments from author:
I was worried about how to explain how Nick didn't find out about Faith being and escaped convict and all of that. It took awhile to get that bit any where near satisfactory, hence the extremly slow update. So I really can't begin to tell you how much your review means to me. Thank you.
Review By [tals] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets" from PaBurke
Review:
I was thinking about this story and had hoped that I had missed an update. No such luck, but I enjoyed the story (all four chapters) as much as I did the first time. I would enjoy seeing more as you are inspired.
PaBurke
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. It got me back to trying to get the next part written. Hope you enjoy it.
Review By [PaBurke] • Date [10 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets" from Christy
Review:
Definitely enjoying it so far. Please don't stop now! lol I know you can't really tell an author what to do, but I feel the need to encourage those writers that I think know how to write fluidly, like you do. Keep up the great work.
Review By [Christy] • Date [22 Aug 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from Thedruid
Review:
Good start. Stop doing drabbles though, and make this into a full story!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [8 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets" from SecondSilk
Review:
Very nice turn around for Nick here.
Review By [SecondSilk] • Date [6 Aug 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Exposed" from Cutiepie
Review:
Oh, oh, oh! More, please! Please write more of this one? Pretty please with chocolate on top? I would love to have them get back together somehow, and . . . yeah. I don't know what else, that is why I'd let you write it. =] I loved the latest chapter of the 'idea that refused to die'. Thank you very much for writing it.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exposed" from CPTSkip
Review:
Wow! Your little story brought tears to my eyes. I hope you write more about these characters. Both Faith and Grissom need more love and happiness in their lives.
Comments from author:
Thank you. That's probably the best compliment you could give me. Someone's actualy that moved by something I wrote...
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Aug 04] • Not Rated
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