lol Can't live with them, can't survive without them. Indeed. So agree with that. Dom's a Malfoy and Joy, is a Harris (Either Xan's and Anya's or Xan and Faiths) lol But what of the rest?
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happenings of Hell-A" from purrfus
Review:
I've seen some HP/Dawn before but this is fun. Hope you come back to it someday.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Happenings of Hell-A" from Dawnie2
Review:
I Love it keep writing PLEASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE it's really really good so far
Review By [Dawnie2] • Date [13 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Robots and polyjuice" from Maria
Review:
*snickers* Oh, this is good. There's little inaccuracies that are driving me nuts though. Dominic and Dominique sound the same but Dominic is the male version and Dominique is the female version. You use the female version when referring to a male. Okay, I think that was my main issue. Please continue because this isn't that bad.
Review By [Maria] • Date [16 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm so glad that you posted this! I am *really really really* curious as to who's children everyone at the Hyperion was. . .I can't wait for Lilah and Ang to meet. I also liked how you made it so that the girl Harry has acts like Dawn and Dawn's daughter acts like Harry.
Review By [Amaranthea] • Date [17 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Well I'm glad you decided to do this, I was thinking that if someone else didn't, I would. Hehe. But anyway, good start but you can definitely tell that you wrote this really early in the morning, perhaps just re-read over your spelling and punctuation. (From memory, you accidently missed a few full stops, and had a few spelling errors, such as, Hermione)
