I really enjoyed this series, I'm not sure how I did not read it before. I would have enjoyed more Willow/Daniel, but it was really well done. I like how you included the canon Buffy-verse as an alternate universe. That worked really well.

This was a great story, very imaginative and with a fair sprinkling of action. The only thing I couldn't figure out is what the pictures were in the envelope to Gen. Hammond. It's obvious she rescued Riley and got Kinsey to drop out of his presidential bid, probably with the help of Jack. Just the pictures ...

Thanks for posting this story, it was a great read.

Spent the weekend reading both stories. Excellent job. I love the way you had Willow grow out of her shyness and meeting the TV-timeline Scoobies was an inspired decision. Very fun!

You did a great job with this story.

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Poor Riley...

Hope Willow takes the opportunity to help Kinsey get in touch with his inner self... i.e. that she turns him into a rat.

oooh great chapter!

“What, take them out for a quick curry and they’ll give us all the trinium and naquadah we could ever want?”

lol - that said, empires have flourished on salt (Roman) & cloves (British - see Indian Ocean slave trade)

enjoying this... also wondering what happened to the two people - American military guys I think - who were with Giles invading the Council back in Londinium.

It would be logical for the Tok'Ra to break off their alliance with the Tau'ri at this point - hope that happens!

Enjoying this so far... getting tired of Jack telling Sam to shut up though

Wow - Jack's being really American in a (not so good) stereotypical way - belligerent, loud, cowboy... wonder what Sam sees in him.

Hoo boy...

EXCELLENT sequel, to say the least.

Kinsey’s motivations in particular were very well-captured- as always, the man is so totally blinkered by his own perception on things that he is UTTERLY incapable of registering that the way things have been done so far has worked out fine-, and his attempt to use the Initiative remnants to get what he was after was another excellent example of his typical ruthlessness.

The part with Daniel and Jack being sent to what looked like the ‘canon’ Buffyverse was another interesting touch; even if I guessed that they were experiencing a kind of time dilation effective fairly quickly- everything WAS still moving, but they were moving too fast to register it; the bit with Buffy reflecting on the vampire that dusted without any sign of attack was a perfect example-, the question of WHAT had caused it was an interesting idea that you tackled rather well (I just wish we could have had a meeting between the two Willows before Willow had to return to her reality).

And as for the conclusion of the mission to rescue Teal’c...

Definitely satisfying, in my opinion; the day is saved, Willow’s comfortable in her own place once again, and Kinsey’s out where he can’t do any harm to anyone.

Keep up the great work!

loved the whole story keot me interested right throughout BUT what was on the photos

I've done nothing for two days but read your fic (and go to class but believe me, this was way more interesting). And I don't regret it ;)

Great story :) I'd love to read more.