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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from bucksavage
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Wow.

That was really intense.

I get why you did what you did with using blocks of script from the movie; it wouldn't make sense otherwise seeing as you weren't outright changing canon so much as augmenting it....if you don't give a baseline, it's harder to follow. The way you melded the fandoms, that was simply amazing.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [19 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from KnightOwl
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I just read your whole story and I have to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I really liked how you paralleled everything with what was happening in both worlds. It made me cry at the end when Buffy gave up her life but then she got to wake up in Middle Earth. I think I liked that the best. I saw there was a sequel and I plan to read that next. Thanks for sharing with the rest of us.
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
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loved this was riveted to every word. laughed my butt off and cried like a baby.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [23 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bluejello
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Interesting ending, I liked it.
Good story, the Scooby gang was well-worked into the LotRverse.
And big bonus points for Xander's Elrond/The Matrix comment.
Slightly odd question: That discussion between Spike and Buffy, where they're talking about having been "for good" verses "for the better"... Was that inspired by the WICKED musical?
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [2 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Pass" from MadBrilliant
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“That’s it!” Xander declared with a ‘eureka’ tone. Buffy, Frodo, Willow and Aragorn looked up ahead at Xander as he turned around, facing Buffy and the others. “The Elrond guy – I swear he looked like that dude from The Matrix!”


i've been waiting for that
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Equilibrium" from MadBrilliant
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poor Spike. he's always trying to get Buffy's attention and it never fails that someone else gets it instead.

highlander bit was great
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thirteen Companions" from MadBrilliant
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You write the Scoobies beautifully!
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "History Repeats Itself" from MadBrilliant
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“Buffy is a fighter. She can handle herself anywhere. And she won’t let anything happen to the others.”

“Except to Spike,” Dawn added.

“Well,” Riley answered with a shrug, “sacrifices have to be made…”


Made me snort
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "They Are Here" from MadBrilliant
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OH MY GOD!!! you called sean bean tall dark and nose!!! *snickers*
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue & The Spell" from MadBrilliant
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Wonderful! I have no idea how I have missed this story! The trance was a brilliant and different way to bring Buffy to arda and it's nice to see she's not alone. this is the first story i've read with Xander and willow and Spike going too
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue & The Spell" from MadBrilliant
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Wonderful! I have no idea how I have missed this story! The trance was a brilliant and different way to bring Buffy to arda and it's nice to see she's not alone. this is the first story i've read with Xander and willow and Spike going too
Review By [MadBrilliant] • Date [20 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thirteen Companions" from jezaeiri
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"Well this is going to be fun."

LOL
That's great.
I love Pippin.
Review By [jezaeiri] • Date [2 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Darkness" from BlameyFomorrii
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Aww- Spike's being all heroic, saving Merry and Pippin. So sweet!

"“Holy Squidward!” Xander shouted as he stood at the water’s edge, staring at the monstrous creature in abject horror. “That’s some Alien sh—!”"

---*giggle* Really lovin' Xander's character in this fic.

I liked Dawn's silent contemplation and turmoil scene in Buffy's bedroom. She's growing as a character without Buffy there to overshadow her true feelings of what's going on. *I love Buffy-but with her there, Dawn never really sat down and thought about her relationship with her sister and how it affected her as a person*

Also-is there significance to the fact that Buffy's silver cross is still at home? Besides the fact that she's in another dimension, crawling with evil , and doesn't have a weapon-little else a protective talisman?

Great chapter! I'm going to finish reading it later.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Pass" from BlameyFomorrii
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"“That’s it!” Xander declared with a ‘eureka’ tone. Buffy, Frodo, Willow and Aragorn looked up ahead at Xander as he turned around, facing Buffy and the others. “The Elrond guy – I swear he looked like that dude from The Matrix!”

---I knew it was coming! *grin*

"“Spike!” Buffy snapped, fed up. She shouted over the wind, “Move or I’ll move you!” Spike turned away, shaking his head and continued up the trail in silence.

Frodo looked up at Buffy with something of a smile, “Do you always frighten men like that?”

“It happens,” Buffy shrugged. “Watch your step.”"

--That's so cute-Buffy's the only one that can keep Spike even a little in line. Loved Frodo's observation.


"“Tabasco,” she whispered and held out her right hand. The top layer of snow glowed crimson for a second, then melted away. "

---I like that, Willow made her own melting spell, and the key word is "Tabasco"


Great chapter!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Equilibrium" from BlameyFomorrii
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"Xander took the plate and peered down at the hobbit as the two sat across from each other at the fire. “Rosie Cotton, eh? Ah, so you’ve got a little hobbit girlfriend.”

Sam looked up at him, embarrassment in his grayish-blue eyes, “Never said any such thing…”

“Oh, come on, you little hobbit love machine,” Xander smirked as he took a bite out of a loaf of bread."
---*giggle* *Squeal* That's great *giggle* love Xander!!

"
“Don’t let some woman push you around,” Xander declared mightily. “Claim your territory and conquer!”

“Xander!” Buffy called from a short distance away. “Where’s that canteen of water?”

“Coming, Buffy,” Xander called back quickly. Sam looked up at him with an amused grin and watched Xander obediently grab a canteen of water and rush over to her as fast as he could."

---Oh Xander-serves you right! Trying to corrupt a poor, defenseless hobbit with talk of conquering women *shame* *Grin*

"Spike gasped with sarcasm, as if he cared what the Fellowship was up to, “Oh. Do I hear a challenge?”

“I have no doubt in my fighting skills,” Boromir responded to Spike.

“Yeah, well,” Willow replied, “when it comes to battles in our world, Buffy’s definitely the ‘go to’ girl.”"

---Boromir-you're going to be Buffy's bitch when she gets done with you!!

"“Thanks,” Buffy nodded, each of them sharing a new respect for the other. “You’re all right yourself. You get a thumbs up in the book of Buffy.” Spike, now paying attention again, watched the two share a half-smile as he glowered to himself, turning his head away with a scoff."

---Poor Spike-always has competition for Buffy's affections.



"“Balance?” Giles shook his head in confusion. “How? That’s impos—”

“One loving heart for another,” Cloutier answered, “one bearer of power, one demon, one champion.”

“I don’t understand your answer,” Giles shook his head.

Cloutier replied, “Then your friends are lost forever. And both worlds will diminish into ruin.” "

---Hmm-will have to think about this one.


ONE DAY?!? At least it's an Earth day and not a Middle Earth day.


Great chapter.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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