Review of chapter "The End!" from bucksavage
Just read this story, took me a while, reading a bit every night, kept me up too late on more than one occasion.....but damn! That was one hell of a story! The original characters; sometimes adding original characters into a piece of fanfiction can come out with them feeling tacked on, added just because or even having them seem like even if they weren't there, weren't added, the story would be the same, you know?
That is not the case here. This story wouldn't be the same without them, they make this story! They bring out some of the best reactions, some of the most emotionally powerful scenes and they help bring Xander's character out. You did a wonderful job on this fic. Thank you for writing it!
Review By [bucksavage
] • Date [16 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End!" from lateVMlover
This was an amazing story with so many great things in it. Your original slayers were so lovable and unique. I'm really glad I found it!
Review By [lateVMlover
] • Date [21 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Angels and Demons: A" from Zeviz
This story is so good that it kept me up way too late last night, but this chapter is so amusing that I just had to stop and leave a review. I love this mental image, especially coming after the heavy mood of the previous chapters.
Review By [Zeviz
] • Date [12 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End!" from Tallie
What a fantastic story! I really enjoyed reading it, and I appreciate all the time you put into this!
Review By [Tallie
] • Date [16 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End!" from LaFlooze
Fantastic. Well-plotted, great characterizations, and intriguing twists that made me laugh and cry and kept me engaged from beginning to end. Thank you!
Review By [LaFlooze
] • Date [17 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End!" from leb
this was a great story
Review By [leb
] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End!" from Raziel
Great story liked how you had Xander in character and even though some people would say the Kinsey killing was ooc for Xander I remember the episode where he threatened to kill Buffy if anything happened to Willow so I can see him doing that for one of his girls.
Review By [Raziel
] • Date [24 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End!" from Spica
Thumbs up for this story.
Review By [Spica
] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End!" from misterwhy
Its great to see this story having close to 1.1million hits.
Lets hope your other stories reach the same levels.
Review By [misterwhy
] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Job Interview" from Difdi
> Regardless of who gave the orders that sent NID agents to whatever
> house they crashed, think of the Council as having diplomatic immunity. They’re free to
> handle this SITUATION as they see fit. Am I clear?”
That's one way to do it. A somewhat more official approach would be an executive order containing the words "I find that the actions of Senator Robert Kinsey and those government agents directly under his command represent a clear and present danger to the national security of the United States."
> “You know,” Riley remarked lightly, though his gaze was wary as he side stepped the puppy pile on the floor. “I’ve never really
> understood that expression.”
That's a VERY strange thing for a soldier to say, since five by five is a military term. It refers to radio signal strength in communications. Clarity and signal strength are each rated on a 0-5 scale, 5 being perfectly clear and 0 not existing. Clarity 0 and signal 5 would be very loud static. Clarity 5 and signal 1 would be almost inaudible but without any interference. 5 by 5 would be perfect clarity and perfect signal strength.
Review By [Difdi
] • Date [13 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End!" from Riniko
Cute story end with it happening at the same place as it started.
Review By [Riniko
] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Don't SEE You" from Shayna
Dead person moving drinking blood no reflection = vampire
How can they not guess!? honestly!
Review By [Shayna
] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End!" from AndreaMaine
ROFLMAO, I love the stories about the IWC and SGC getting together especially the ones where they wind up working together in the long run. I can just see Jack convincing President Henry Hayes in a few years to bring the IWC into HWS just so Daniel and Giles can bugger the IOA together trying to wrangle funds for the SGC and IWC.
Review By [AndreaMaine
] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Empty" from breve
I'm officially obsessed with this story.
I actually cried, cried! real tears when Ashley died :(
I'm secretly happy that there's still lots more to go!
Review By [breve
] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Frankenstein!" from breve
i'm going to be late for work because i cannot stop reading :-/
can't wait to get home to keep reading.
fantastic story so far.
i always kinda liked barrett so i hope he's not too big of a dick if he makes a re-appearance
Review By [breve
] • Date [22 Jul 12] • Not Rated