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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Starfox
Great Story! Very nice blending of one of my favorite animes and Buffy.
Review By [(Current Donor)Starfox] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TachikomasUncle
Excellent. Assassins are difficult to write, but when properly executed (pun intended) are a delight to read about. Kudos on the entire series. . . hope you pick it up again.

Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the stories. I do have parts of the next story written, but I won't post until it's completely done.
Review By [TachikomasUncle] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Wow, a very interesting fic here. I like. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [27 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Kovac
One of the best Halloween stories I ever read. And I read a lot!

Dawn was cunning and chilling in her Kirika characterisation but she's also just a little girl lost and I felt for her.. The dialogues between Buffy, Cordelia, Xander, Willow and Angel were hilarious and so in character. Perfect!

Great job!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comment, it's always good to hear when somebody enjoys one of my stories.
Review By [Kovac] • Date [23 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Obsidian
Very interesting story you have here. I look forward to reading the rest.

Review By [Obsidian] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TonyTheJew
One thing in the Halloween fic you don't see is the person believe that they are in there our body and not believe some ghost. You did great with the point of view changes, And love see how people see different thing in the same thing.
Great story keep up the good work.
Review By [TonyTheJew] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from arkeus
Yosh, great work :-)
It's kinda sad you don't seem to like Willow though, i think she is the only majr character we haven't had a seen from yet.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments, including the ones about the previous chapter. Actually, while I'm not all that fond of Willow my main reason that I haven't given her a very big role in any of my stories is the fact that I can't get into her head. I simply haven't managed to write her yet in a way that satisfies me, but there is at least one story that I've planned where she does have a large role to play so I intend to manage it by the time I write that.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from arkeus
It's quite good to have the characters actually believing they are real that way :-) And boy is Dawn's character a chore.
Great work.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from arkeus
Ahah, i finally managed to put on the courage to read this story of yours. Your Dawn is surpisingly childish, but i guess a crush can do that. The Soldier/Willow relation was dead funny, though it did comeclose to willow bashing, and she is my favorite character, so... Of course, i haven't see the ep in question, so it could have been like that.

Great work. Sadly there isn't any big bad wizards like in your Discworld cross, but...Good.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments, and exhibiting the courage you needed. :-)

Yes, Dawn is rather childish here, certainly in this first chapter, but this is during a time she could still be a child: before she learned about the things that go bump in the night and before anything really serious happened to her.
While I admit that Willow isn't my favorite character, I don't like bashing characters so that wasn't the intention.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
I know nothing about Noir, and I don't usually go to the Anime section, so if your story hadn't been listed as a recommend after I finished a review for another story I probably never would have found it. Gotta love the recommend list after review posting, because missing this story would definitely be a shame. I can't wait to read the sequel.

I adore Halloween fics featuring any character as long as they are well-written, that said, one of the things I like best about your story is the way you gave time to all of the characters but didn't lose your focus on Dawn.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comments. I'm glad you found the story and liked it.
As you've probably already seen, there are already a number of other stories in the series for you to read, so I hope you'll enjoy them as well.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)oldshoe
I came back to this series and was very happy to see your new version, which is great. In the old version, if I remember correctly, Dawn was essentially murdered by her costume and replaced by a monster, sort of like Fred and Ilyria. Your new version allows for better character development, which I hope to see in the later stories.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the rewrite. Although I really do hope that the original version didn't come over like you describe it. That certainly wasn't the intention when I wrote it, and if it did I pretty much failed at it. In which case I made up with the rewrite, but still...
Enjoy the rest of the series.
Review By [(Past Donor)oldshoe] • Date [20 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Dang! This story is a real winner. Your story started out all fluffy and light and just kept turning darker and darker as it went along. I hope you write more to this story as I love how you handled the characters and would really love to see Dawnie as a stone cold assassin. Good work and I look forward to more of your work with a great deal of anticipation.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliments. Tomorrow first a short story (about half the size of this one) and later more sequels will follow. They have been planned but I want to finish another series of stories first, which shouldn't take much more then a week but you never know.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Cutiepie
OK, I'm sorry about not reviewing before. But, in truth, I know nothing about Noir, and was just feeling my way along. However, I still found it to be an interesting and thought-provoking story. Thank you for the effort you put into writing it. =]
Comments from author:
That's alright, I'm not exactly fast with reviewing myself. When I first thought of writing the story I had thought of putting in a summary of Noir, since I know that there aren't that many people who know it. But I forgot to actually do so. I will do it however in the sequel that will be posted sunday, maybe that way you will understand certain actions better.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [24 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Tegasus
Good story! I don't know the anime, but I didn't feel like I needed to to understand the story. I loved reading things from a 12 year old Dawn's point of view, I don't think I've read one like that before. The only thing that I think could make the story better, would be if you put a summery of the anime at the beginning of the story so those who don't know it could understand a little more of the character's reasoning. Overall though, very good story! ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. You are right about the summary though and I'll put one in the sequel, thanks for reminding me.
Review By [Tegasus] • Date [24 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CPTSkip
Oh, yes, I enjoyed this part also. I think you are doing an outstanding job with your characterizations. Not only are you doing a nice job with the characters not changed, i.e. Cordy, Willow, and Angel, but I love your "changed" versions of Xander and Dawn. And not only have you done a good job with your characters, but the plot seems very "Buffyish". I can't wait to see how this little gem of yours ends. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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