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Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from LostDragon
Review:
Just re-read this and I still love it, it just needs a sequel.
Comments from author:
If your interested I posted a few more chapters on fanfiction.net
Here is the link

http://www.fanfiction.net/~drgonzo
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A not So Amazing Fantasy" from BlackWishBone
Review:
I think you mean will here->"Well I ever see you again"
Comments from author:
Ah yes, I remember those happy care free days back when I didn't think I needed a bata reader, Glad I grew out of THAT stage
Review By [BlackWishBone] • Date [23 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from Cdog
Review:
This was a wonderful story and I hope that one day you continue Xander's adventures as the web slinger.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [6 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from IcemanII
Review:
Nice xander story. Good job. I'll happily read the sequel.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from thundever
Review:
Great chap and story, please continue with this idea it is great and interesting.
Review By [thundever] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "The Amazing Spider-Zeppo" from spike
Review:
Love this story hope you finish it soon
Review By [spike] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Amazing Spider-Zeppo" from SamJames
Review:
Excellent work. I like how your keeping most of the elements of actual Buffy episodes but twisting them somewhat to match the Spider-man mythos. So, Willow as the Scarlet Witch maybe? The color fits.

Keep it up!
Review By [SamJames] • Date [11 Feb 07] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Amazing Spider-Zeppo" from vitruvian
Review:
Nice story, although you definitely need a beta reader for grammar and word choice (clamor, not clamber, and so on).

One note, though, in your summary you state that the Spider-Man that helps out in the LA demon dimension is actually Venom, but in that actual chapter the character does not refer to Xander as Father, but thanks him for helping save Mary Jane... one or the other needs to change if you want this to be consistent. You also might want to address how the Scoobies manage to bring down the Judge or think of the explosive solution to Graduation without Xander having actually become Soldier Boy that Halloween. Also, I don't believe the 'dinosaur' skeleton the murdered professor was studying was supposed to actually be *in* Sunnydale.

Other than those small points, though, very interesting reworking of Spider-Man characters in Buffyverse terms.
Review By [vitruvian] • Date [6 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Amazing Spider-Zeppo" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Nice even if I can't place the new player.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [16 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Amazing Spider-Zeppo" from rob2
Review:
Good part, man that town is getting busy. ;)

Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [9 Nov 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Amazing Spider-Zeppo" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Finaly got to this, sorry it took so long. Nice twist on the Halloween episode, its nice to know that little ms Widdow isn't so perfect afterall.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [1 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Amazing Spider-Zeppo" from rob2
Review:
Great part, very good story.


Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [22 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Great work. I like the idea of Cordy becoming DareDevil, very nice. One question though, if Joyce didn't die during this time wouldn't someone have told her this already? If so why is Xander telling her everything now that she is dead?
Comments from author:
Good question DH, Joyce is going to die. how it happens and under what circumstances
may change as well as how important Joyce is to Xander before it happens.

It would have felt like cheating to gwen stacy an important character like joyce without
giving her a chance to shine first.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [5 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Graduation Daze" from rob2
Review:
Some great new parts. And I bet Cordy looks much better in red leather than Matt ever did. ;)

Also a great idea using Xander's dad as the goblin, he was nice and evil even before his change.


Rob
Review By [rob2] • Date [5 Sep 04] • Not Rated
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