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Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from spring
Review:
huh
Review By [spring] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from DawnDreamer
Review:
This is an exelent Buffy stargate sg1 fanfic. I cant wait for the next part
Review By [DawnDreamer] • Date [6 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from Misha
Review:
It's okay. I don't like how when you are writing some thing and put (there you go so and so). Put it in your authors note that you are doing that for some one. Other than that it's good.
Review By [Misha] • Date [31 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from Damia
Review:
Very nice. I am really liking your fic. It's amusing and makes sense. Write more soon.
- Damia -
Review By [Damia] • Date [28 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from Damia
Review:
Hey, I know it's kinda late for a review or whatever, but you get serious kudo's for Monty Python parody. Especially since Sir Robin and his merry band of Minstrels were my favorite part of the holy grail. (personally, I like the life of Brian)
- Damia -
(and on with my reading)
Review By [Damia] • Date [28 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from sparrowhawk
Review:
I like what you have going....just a little bit of helpful stuff...Sam is Major in the airforce....yeah that's about it....if you are still in need of a beta....rogue17hawk@yahoo.com is my email....

Rogue
Review By [sparrowhawk] • Date [17 Feb 05] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from LadyCarpathian
Review:
Ok, now this is just weird. The story is a good one. And you’re keeping the players in character really well. I definitely love the premise for this.... And letting SG1 walk right into a vamp attack.... That was just perfect.... *Monstrous Sniggerz* I really want to read the next Chappie.

Hate to say it, but you really need a beta. The spelling and punctuation alone is atrocious. Now, don’t take this as a flame. Not my intention.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review, Yeah I know i need a Beta i am still looking but I have an Odd job and so not reliable acess to the net to post!! I have a few new chaps typed up but I cant post yet so you'll have to hang on the edge of your seat for a bit more sorry,!!
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [27 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from ELVENPHOENIX2
Review:
Sarah,

Sweety If you look you'll see that I did say I liked the new chappie. I'm hoping for a preview of the next one cause you know how impatiant I am about your fics. Your such a smart ass and I love it.

I had Cheesy spaghettii last night. it was yummy.

Anyway mum says she's gonna drop you on your head if you don't keep in contact with us. She was looking a bit violent, maybe you should hurry up and call us.

About that sms you sent me. I'm sure we wouldnt have goat babies. i think they would turn out to be iguanas. orange ones with yellow polka dots. and nobody is allowed to do *That* in the cheese room!!!!

Love Cindy
Review By [ELVENPHOENIX2] • Date [25 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from ELVENPHOENIX2
Review:
Sarah,

Your Phone is disconnected and i cant contact you. I only just figured out how to register here and tripped out by the new chapter. Still loving your story.

Call me I have my ID and we can go clubbing. P.S I still have your Harry Potter books and the Anita Blake story you were writing. Damn Asher sounds hot.!!!!

Love Cindy
Comments from author:
All that and not a comment on the story!!!!!!!!! I am sooooo sad,

Hey i WONDERED were that story went !! though I seem to have lost a few others as well... I have to go now anyway so I'll drop u a line!!!

LUV phantom
Review By [ELVENPHOENIX2] • Date [21 Oct 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from Kessy
Review:
Okay, where to start... This story reads like a report. There are no emotions, no thoughts... Dawn is totally out of character. Of course you will say she has changed drastically due to her...calling, whatever. Which, in itself, is a fairly good idea (Dawn going all Superhero), but there's still no depth behind it all. The storyline you're trying to create might be good, but you're rushing things. It seems to me you just want to get the hell on with the plot, and in the process you're neglegting all things that make a story credible. Not to mention the punctuation. You said your beta is MIA, but honestly, can't you put a comma in a sentence without one? Just put one where you'd take a breath while reading. The way you're writing just confuses the reader, who'll have to read every paragraph twice to get the meaning. Which is kind of frustrating. Especially because the actual idea behind the story is so interesting. You don't want to just dismiss it as bad, but on the other hand it's an act of incredible patience to read this. So, my advice: Get a new beta. And try to go slow with the storyline. Maybe read some of the other fanfictions here and see what's different about them. I'd really like to see where this story's going.
Comments from author:
WOW I love it, do you want to be my beta !!
I have a very *interesting* job and find proof reading hard (along with the time to actualy write the thing) but I suppose that isn't much of an exuse!

please drop me an E-Mail realcowsdontmoo@yahoo.com, I would love to hear more and thanks !! I love honest people!!!!!!!!!!

A/N: I did finaly locate my Beta, she's been re-posted to another state and didn't get enough warning to tell me and also got promoted so will not be able to be my beta anymore *sad face*

thanks again frogstompinfun
Review By [Kessy] • Date [17 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from CPTSkip
Review:
OK, I am liking your story. You've done a nice job with Dawn's character and with the SGC team. I have noticed a few spelling problems. Jack is a COLONEL not a cornel and Sam is either a captain, major, or now a lieutenant colonel, depending on where in the series you are setting your story. Other than these little nitpicks, I really enjoyed your story and hope you continue writing.
Comments from author:
I know I noticed that, I sooooo very muchly need my Beta to show her face!!!!

I am so sorry you are totaly right Duh she's a major now I forgot!!!
thanks for the point out
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Uh Oh" from JoeHundredaire
Review:
Mmm, gotta love those minuets.
Comments from author:
hahahahah I know damable missing beta!!!
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from grd
Review:
enjoyable story, but you really need a beta. Your spelling of Cornel should be Colonel. I like how you've portrayed Dawn.
Comments from author:
Trust me I know I realy have to find her (grrrrrrrr) I am soooooo very not happy if I cant get onto her in the next week or so I will just have to find a new one!!!!

but thanks for the review
Review By [grd] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vamp 101" from (Recent Donor)etznab
Review:
Nice start
Comments from author:
Thanks I was a little nervous but I think it was good
Review By [(Recent Donor)etznab] • Date [16 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Neon Orange" from grd
Review:
nice start. although some spelling corrections are needed, cornel should be colonel. more soon please
Comments from author:
Dont worry more on the way, and I am kicking myself about that one !!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [grd] • Date [25 Sep 04] • Not Rated
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